Juneurdark

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not level 15?

Thank you

Gracias por Tu Obra estuvo muy buena. Lo leí por Arcos y me pareció excelente. Muchas gracias por darle buen final.

Buenos Capitulos, sigue asi :D

The Mc is more prepared, has more materials such as Dylan's gardens and get the most out of the academy (also to obtain Kroft's potions and Doroti's research took time). Because as I remember the original timeline, Leylin is very hasty by the persecution for having killed the heir Bosain in change the Mc of this timeline with calm and preparation he became an official Magus, in addition to doing San Caballero and his troops as well (what he's doing in the original timeline is rushing to grab and chase by lilytell family).

Then Nyssa died because I remember that in the original novel she found something of value that interested one of the Lytell family in their territory was about to die but Mc, who was being fond of Blodine, attacked and accidentally saved her. gave him the craving for more strength and a lightning bolt from her. In this timeline, Mc will not make that movement which leads to her dying in that situation.

Entonces Nyssa murio porque yo recuerdo que en la novela original ella encontro algo de valor que le intereso a uno de la familia Lytell en su territorio estuvo a punto de morir pero Mc que estaba siendo afecto por la Blodine ataco y casualmente la salvo, a ella le dio el ansias por mas fuerza y un punto fulminante de ella. En esta linea de tiempo Mc no hara ese movimiento lo que conlleva que ella muera en esa situacion.

Mejor no elimines las notas autor porque son como tus puntos de opinión en medio de tu suministros de capítulos. Además los lectores pueden publicar reseñas que te pueden servir a futuro. Por ultimo, Gracias por tu fanfiction me gusta :D