Ahh, si sorry bro, i hate the "it was a dream" trope. Amazing story btw.

So, all of it was a dream, you pull off a Oliver witouth legs? Fk u man.

I love that he uses the force more than his lightsaber. I love Star wars fics, but they put characters with 40k of midichlorians but fights 99% of the fights are lightsaber duels. Barely using the most op power telekinesis.

I really hope he stays in Brazil, i am not a fan de los xman.

Hoka can Challenge hiashi for lidership and spread rumors that the main clan mantain slaves with the seal. Make a new seal for everyone that doesnt have the killing part, make an outrage so big that they cant kill hoka. And kill the elders of the clan in the invasión, i guess fujin will reveal his flying thunder god and support hoka for stability until tsunade comes by then the new seal would be put on everyone.

At least he keep training, he needs to be better than the og cap. When he is in the military, he can learn from his "comandos".

Is he mentally ill? every decisión he makes is Bad, tatia, esther and mikael, elijah, a now daliah? Every decisión he makes end up with cripple or dead family member.

How good is he fighting, i mean sword, bow, Morningstar, maze etc? I think i read only 1 chapter talking about training, but nothing more.

Uff, everything was good until i read system. A new soul in Sam and a ladys man would be enough, with future knowlege and the búnker before joining college and bam good ffc. Solo for a time and later join Dean. Good luck with your story, this is not hate comment btw. I always search for a good supernatural ffc.

Yeah, it's really boring to read knowing he will always loose, and that tappei it's injured anyway. Whats the point, waiting for the main cast to win like in the anime?

Use a tape of the Match and the injure on propuse and distribute it, who wants to play only to get injure?

i al totally lost.

Finally you are back, thanks for the chapter bro. Not gonna lie, i still waiting for your vader story. I want to see a lot of chapters of the vader story now that you came back C:

Vitiate rules!

hope that there isnt an harem at all.

It would kill me if that happen, i dont know anything about 40k u.u

You know, a POV for the perspective of cassandra would not be bad at all, we dont know much about what he has teach her etc. Good chapterlike always bro.

Maybe a full on war with the triarchy and other essossi people, and plunder those parts, maybe they attempt to kill baelon and his family, the 7 kingdoms united where to strong so if they kill them it would be better to essos, balon goes to war, it would be a little of a let down if its a dance of dragons now that you have neutralized the greens and blacks, you practicly have no enemies in westeros. It would be a legacy, the 7 kingdomes vs essos, where all of his sibilings can grow, and let behind the bad infulences(otto) (rhaenyra) etc die alone in westeros wanting to be kings and queens, not realizing that they have lost a long time ago, when his children dont want the throne and are fighting for the future of the house of the dragon. Wow, i kinda rambling sorry, amazing story btw bro, i have been folowing this story since chapter 3, and i love it.

No pls, i hate omakes, waiting a lot of time to read an exiting chapter, only to find out it was an omake, nothing more hateful than that.

No pls, i hate omakes, waiting a lot of time to read an exiting chapter, only to find out it was an omake, nothing more hateful than that.