mate please, look up the correct moves please don't name them yourself. Oh, by the way its a shiny gastly

I feel like you have written this in third person point of view

Start of every fan fic, cant you choose another place

Osiris is also the god of the underworld

1. Starter: Tyranitar (Rock/Dark) - Land Powerhouse 2. Houndoom (Fire/Dark) 3. Hydreigon (Dark/Dragon) - Air Powerhouse 4. Greninja (Water/Dark) - Speed 5. Drapion (Dark/Poison) - Defence 6. Absol or Umbreon (Dark) - Always out

When will his starter hatch from its egg?

I don't understand that last sentence?

Stop using "she"

sharingan mate get it right

Powerhouses: Salamance, Tyranitar Tanks: Blastoise, Aggron Support: Gardevoir, Roserade All Rounders: Gengar, Krookodile

to OP should of made it Water Dragon Or Lightning Dragon instead

Overall, it is a good story, but is your MC gender challenged? If not and he is a male use the words he or sorcerer which implies that he is a male. If your MC is a female call her something else not Ron and use she or Sorceress.

a male is called a sorcerer and a female is called a sorceress, I am guessing your Main character is gender challenged?

Translation

I think seperate it into two different magics for basic magic Storm God Slayer & Storm Devil Slayer Than call it Storm Demonic God Slayer Magic as a fusion

Please don't make him her slave this is getting repetitive with him constantly losing. He is a Demi-GOD with MAGIC he should at least be able to get out of these sort of situations.

You should mention a Mandibuzz and Braviery, to avoid confusion.

Instant mastery is too OP, you should Nerf it to 10x mastery instead. Otherwise it will be hard for your story to go past 20 chapters because it will be to boring to read.

Why does the king have a Chinese name and the rest English names?

Maybe you should check out the Pokédex before writing to avoid confusion when choosing Pokemon. I am still confused is the Pokemon a Vullaby (Dark/Flying) or a Rufflet (Normal/Flying). Please make it clear!