ShuYme

trash Chinese harem novel, need i say more?

author doesn't know anything about one piece, names are misspelled or even wrong, events and well known facts are wrong, it's just a power fantasy and not a well written one, I read up until chapter 40 something and the mc hasn't become likeable in the least, there are minimal interactions between characters and the ones that actually happen are boring and lacking in substance. The mc hasn't been fleshed out and we don't really get his motivations or thoughts beyond "oh I'm so strong and smart and handsome and everyone else is weak" there doesn't seem to be any overarching motivations to his actions, and if after 40 chapters we still don't know allot about the mc, his likes and dislikes, nothing. In addition all the other characters are surface level at best

i haven't read it since iImade the review and at that point the mc was still a baby so iIreally don't know

ffs, sharingan is such a copout, lazy and unimaginative writers are in love with that stupid eye and it ruins their fanfics from the jump

Im sure it gets better but iIcould only handle like 20 chapters before the fic got too boring, nothing exuciting or fun stuff happens, the dialogue is okay but again it's kinda dull, the entirety of what i read was dull

degenerate

is that in the anime, or is it just fan lore?

would ninjas even know what lasers are? it's fairly high-tech compared to the technological advancements they have in the anime?

hopefully you cover the war against the thalmor, the first dragon born, and much more, hopefully this fic continues on a lot longer, It is a joy to read

it's weird that random thugs are that strong, in one piece everyone except pirates and marines seem kinda weak and meh