Started great but went downhill from there very fast. The MC act with little to no logic in his actions and I honestly had to greet my teeth every time he is making another stupid decision that's frustrated me to no end. If this novel was bad I wouldn't be so mad but it's actually good and that's what frustrated me more.

This is one of those novels where the author doesn't just focus on the MC, but also on the side characters. And I don't like it. Maybe if the other characters were interesting or something but they are honestly not. I liked how at the beginning the MC was using his system to get stronger and evolve, why would I want to read about the experience of side characters and what they are doing? So I simply skipped those chapters. Unfortunately things got worse as the MC started to receive rewards from his own system to give to his students so they can get stronger, and that's for me was the most stupidest thing. Why nerf your own MC and empower side characters???? Overall, the feeling I received from this novel is that it focuses way too much on slice of life instead of cultivation, also too much cheap comedy in my opinion.(His own disciple doesn't talk to him with respect too) And the slow pace of progress was so agonizing I literally skipped chapters just to move on with the plot.. I would say this here is someone Western trying to copy the writing style of Eastern cultivation novels and he wasn't successful at all... Honestly the only good things in this novel is the fact the world building was done excellently and logically and the grammar was without any mistakes that I could find.

Sometimes the MC acts mature, as expected of someone who receives a whole lifetime of memories from reincarnation. And sometimes he acts like a little kid, according to his physical age... I hate those kinds of fanfics. Anyway, this here feels more like a slice of life type of novel, instead of action and training type of Naruto fanfic. I got bored after the first 15 chapters and dropped it. I don't mean to say it's a bad type of slice of life but I simply didn't like it.

The author put such an info dump on the first few chapters I got an headache, and I didn't even know if it's worth it! Later on I lost interest since it got too cliche with the plots and the grammar and compensations were too awkward so I dropped it a chapter 10.

Usually I like lemon fanfics but just as the author said one needs to shut off your brain to read this... It's very hard to follow the conversation and the flow of the story wasn't quite good. Overall and considering the grammar was quite good I would give this a 3.5 star review.

I don't know if this story is good or bad but from a brief search in the reviews I spot the user Blazzing18 give dozens of five stars reviews. And since even if I complain to the website management they still won't delete those extra reviews, I felt obligated to give this story a 1 star review to try and balance things out...

I have read till chapter 36 before dropping it cuz it got too boring. It started nice and I really loved how the MC evolved and got stronger slowly over the chapters. However eventually I got annoyed by the evolution system which wasn't explained very well, and it appeared the MC has lost sight of his goal, he started to train his legion monsters instead of getting stronger himself. The writing quality was excellent without any mistakes and the world background was fine as far as I read. The MC personality was also okay so I guess I'll give this a five-star in everything except for the Story Development.

Thanks for the chapter, hope you will keep up with the good work 🙂

Thanks for the chapter, hope you will keep up with the good work 🙂

Some Chinese MLT are very bad but this one is honestly still readable, and in my opinion the fanfic is so good that I still recommend giving it a try.

Till chapter 27 the MC focused on becoming stronger as fast as he could while staying true to his goals and caring only about himself. But from chapter 27 each saga started to drag on for multiple chapters for no reason, each fight was more than several chapters when it could have ended in one chapter and be done with it. And the MC himself, for some reason decided to give his 3 daughters to some dryads idiotically! I mean come on!! The flow of the story is quite good, but the translation is bad, the quality is such that every chapter there are multiple times the translator confuses the pronouns and addresses a male as a "she" and a female as a "he"... Sometimes even going as far as to address a person as a "it"... It's understandable but not good. However despite the bad translation I have still read till chapter 118 in one go since it was so good of a plot. I've enjoyed reading how the MC progressively got stronger using his system, his character growth, the slow Kingdom Building, and in general the story as a whole. So except for the writing quality which will get only one star, I will give this fanfic of five star in everything else.

Thanks for the chapter, hope you will keep up with the good work 🙂

That girl was totally acting like an NPC..

Waste of a chapter, the MC got there late and won't change anything...

Why does it feel like the MC will only get there when everything is over??

Don't blame the MC, blame the author like I do...

Can we please return to the MC already, it's getting so boring reading this...

So the MC liberated Jerome and in exchange he is going to make him a Witcher, so why does Jerome seek compensation from the MC for turning him to a Witcher?

Useless chapter, can we move on with the plot??

Another boring chapter to skip.