KingFischer

perhaps they move, but they wouldn't move any more than normal, and they certainly wouldn't "shoot up"

Ey thanks, though one does not need to be good at something to understand whether or not someone else is good or bad at something, it certainly helps when you’re trying to fix your own writing, i haven’t gotten around to writing anything lengthy yet though, so i wouldn’t say i’m any good at writing yet.

Oh, i think you might like guild wars then, It’s not super long yet though, and it’s been quite some time since i last read webnovels, so it might have been removed/gone downhill though, i did try cultivation chat group but i didn’t enjoy it all that much :(

No, interesting, though i think that Problem could be dealt with better in another fashion, especially since this is fantasy/fiction, but bleeding does have it’s own uses huh, aside from coagulating a wound for better healing.

Thanks for the LotM reccomendation, really enjoyed that book, though i wasn’t very fond of the mc.

If you can tell me that they definitively resolve the issues i listed then i am willing to give it a second try? Those issues are what ultimately forced me away from the book, if they don’t get resolved I wont be able to enjoy anything else in this book no matter how good it is, simply because the author himself wrote and proceeded to forget what he wrote, there is no theorycrafting for the future of the characters in this book because its all stupid ass mc who gets in trouble and authors asspulls keeping him alive, despite having other tools at hand. Also; i already know you can’t do that, because someone else would have already done it if you could; ppl love to call out others for being wrong, but i’ll give you a chance to adress those issues yourself.

«Wow! Impressive!»? Don’t quite understand what you mean, i’ve never seen approbation used before this one time

It might be an attempt at replicatIng the suffix «-ee», as in «Evolvee» referring to a member of a group of people that have «evolved» or in this case gained wierd powers...

Oh wow, leave your injured but valuable friend alone in a base where he recently killed the leader, anyone smart would take advantage and grab jerry as a hostage. this is litterally a den of criminals, the carelessness is headache inducing.