Doc_og
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I didn`t finish all of it so i`m a going to judge from what i just read . First i can`t say it is good, also it isn`t very bad so Not bad . The story flow needs a more work put into it . The grammar is okay i say okay because the flow is just plain bad . Simple beta-ing will make it much better than it is . Also maybe plan the each chapter otherwise the current situation is kind of makes regular readers lost . It is nothing to an avid reader but for someone who just reads for reading sake won`t get through it . It is unique and has promise
The score is mostly due to my own desire to read more. But i think it is by far mostly fair except the stability of updates as 3 ch is not enough to rate it. It is Marvel world background with Danny Phantom Powered Mc , so you can`t say bad things as quality of the writing quite excellent. Keep it up Author XDDDD
The writing quality is improving, But the pacing of the story is just a blur . The MC is okay, has to deal with way too fast of a pace, he does not seems to get a time to improve at a decent rate before being bulldozed into action . Maybe because it is apocalypse, the mc isnt given time at least become mid - tier power wise . This story stand out as it has a idea what it is or at least the author has an idea where this is going . Hope the author continues and improves at the rate he has.
i feel like the author is doing this to us ( the readers ) on purpose. While i`m not expert on the english , i feel as though he is making purposefully bad . If it was just completely bad i would be okay with it , but with small yet completely unforgivable mistakes ....... oh bleh
i like ur decision not every novel should have *** scene as a matter of fact not every novel has to have romance in it also
hello. Would you be writing for this story or dropping it?