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Brian707071hเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วif I was mc I wouldn't bother with a golden finger it's just matter of time for mc to advancr
"Yes, Sister Lian!" Guo Ye said, "The Black Armored Guards are recruiting people. With my martial arts talent, I have no chance, but Xu Ning, you have to seize this opportunity and enter the Black Armored Guards!"- Brian707071hเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
definition of stupid
"Generally speaking, those who practice a second external skill are those who can no longer improve their internal skills. If you do not practice internal skills, you are wasting your talent." - Brian707071hเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
reminded me of king shark their
Tao Yunmeng's mighty and fierce physique contrasted with the book in his hand. - Brian707071hเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
wasn't she like 12/13
She was the granddaughter of Tao Jingxing, the head of the Tao Clan. She had collected the Spring Breeze Tactic prize with him. - Brian707071hเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วTao Ye came over and tapped Xu Ning's chest.
- Brian707072hเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
mc should receive a horse
The two horses left by the horse bandits were also taken by them. - Brian707072hเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
I think he is just wanting to find some supplies from the dead
"Uncle Gang gave me 50 taels of silver as payment, and so I have to show that I'm worthy of it." - Brian707072hเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
hahaha
Yao Wudi, in his usual unbothered style, kicks a hole in the ground and manages to level his height with Hu Zaixi. - Brian707076hตอบกลับถึง John_Henry_9291
or 1 day travel too 1 day sell 1 day buying 1 day relaxing 1 day travel back
At the speed of the donkey carriage, it would take close to one day to get from Tao Village to Kangyun County—the distance was quite far. - Brian707076hตอบกลับถึง
1 day travel 1 day travel back 3 days to sell and or buy things
At the speed of the donkey carriage, it would take close to one day to get from Tao Village to Kangyun County—the distance was quite far. - Brian707076hเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
then why not pay upon arrival at the city
Guo Ye seemed to notice Xu Ning's confusion, so he explained, "It's rare for people to travel to the city. My uncle pays in advance so that everyone can buy something they like in the city." - Brian707077hตอบกลับถึง FangYuansGrampa
your an idiot
Two guards holding weapons stood in front of the old clan church. Xu Ning walked forward, and before he could speak, one of the guards asked Xu Ning, "Did you pass the training test and come here to collect the reward?" - Brian7070718hตอบกลับถึง INnOUT
said somewhere earlier around 3000 population might have been a comment though
Xu Ning estimated there were more than 200 people in the school field. - Brian7070718hตอบกลับถึง alsiee
then mc goes full
Because they were in a village, there was no need to worry too much about Tao Tao's safety. - Brian7070719hตอบกลับถึง TheDragonBeyond
what if she looked like that
Xu Ning was not born and raised in the Tao Village, instead he and his older sister, Xu Lian, came here a few years ago. - Brian7070719hเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
so question can he absorb his own energy I've scarred you for life
"Absorbing energy… absorption complete." - Brian7070719hตอบกลับถึง Soma2000
Have you seen this one before
Flying was strictly forbidden within Lakir City. As such, the flying boat dropped Aksai and his companions off outside the main city. Aksai bid adieu to Uncle Laairo before heading towards the city gate in his vision. - Brian7070719hแปะแล้ว
didn't read one chapter 1 star review due to idiocy and length of synopsis alone and wtf is with the dying reincarnation dying and going back intime but without memories of first life just makes everything retarded. have mc from earth be genius die and reincarnated on another planet simple not such convoluted bullsh@t
- Brian7070719hตอบกลับถึง Primordial_Seven
a synopsis is meant to catch readers attention unfortunately yours doesn't and by telling people read it to find out puts off others as well keep it basic, (mcs name here) had tragic life (no details to make them wonder what's tragic) upon reincarnation due to dying due to (reason of death) he/she awakens ... then give list of questions for the potential reader not commands, commands are off putting but questions are like ear worms would get stuck in readers mind and want to read it. a example don't think of black cat, that is a command and I've automatically made you think of one. now you are annoyed that my example has proven correct and you become dismissive. but if I say is their a black cat at your window, you not only thought of a black cat but have now or will look at a window and think, is their a black cat their. and the next time you go past a window and this post crosses your mind you will ask yourself again is their a black cat at the window. this has caused me to become an incessant ear worm in your mind that is impossible to remove due to the phrasing of the question. even years later you would ask that question. now when it comes to writing if asking questions related to the book will he, can he etc etc even if reader already knows without reading they would still want to know if they are correct and by how much and how. examples can catness everdeen survive the hunger games, can harry potter defeat the dark lord, how does a hundred year old man jump out a window and disappear, why and who was someone mudred on the orient express
- Brian707072dตอบกลับถึง FirstHokage