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Dont you dare give up or i am taking back my funding from patreon you are a fantastic writer and i wanna read your stuff when you decide to.make them for the right reason(not that a bad test got you) i have faith in you ps i am not saying dont write tough(/≧◇≦\)
how did it go??
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my man wheree are youuuuuuuu
i kind of realize that with my last few comments it could have.ended on a negative note so you are a fantastic writer and have a good idea on using biblical materials to fill out the settinh of yiur story as someone who read it pretry mich all at once i can confidently say you have improves drasticaly and while this was not for me as to be honest it was barely a fanfci especialy in the dream it was good as a non fanfic you might want to consider letting your new readers know what they are getting into
i mean do it you would have an audiance i would tap out cause i wanna read abou these characthers on different setting main reason i read fanfic is for the charavthers i like
honestly the one thing abkut your storie that i honestly dislike is him it was extremely forced
that is true tbh if i knew the story was going to go this way i would.not have touched it and i am not sure if i put all this time for a hope of a future where it came back to that or due to all the time i invested
again who despised them? from the begining? well maybe aurelia but i would say my opinion of her is worsse now