JadeMonkey

Alt Account trash. Going around copy paste the same review on other novels. You even copied the top review here word for word.

If you scroll back up. It says he had 325. Now he used 300 so he should have 25 left.

I admit i feel bad that you went back and changed it. That wasn’t my intention. I was giving constructive criticism and feed back because it seem like a plot hole that could’ve been prevented. I will admit that your changes make the story feel smoother now. Like he couldn’t make up his mind which is good for character development, because he’s conflicted with how he feels and what he needs to do.

I understand the character growth. It seems silly because 2 months is a long time after the first apocalypse events. Most of the bad habits and personality should be tempered and hardened at this period. After all 50% of the worlds population is deceased. Tomorrow can be his last day for all he knows, more strength is good. For example: A civilian takes roughly 2 months to change their morales and mindset. To make a prey into predator. MC is in an even worst situation. He’s thrown into the crucible, he wouldn’t leave something so beneficial. Even if it was given to him. Im sorry for the rant. I will continue reading more.

Im sorry, this had a good start but now it’s shaky. Hear me out. Apocalypse setting world and knows he’s weak. Refusing a free benefit is a Darwin Award Winner. I’m 50/50 contemplating if i should drop this because that is a BIG mistake. I don’t mind MC making mistakes but this is not a mistake. He let his pride and ego get the best of him. He is given an opportunity and decided against it.

The sword is on his back, of course he’s going to have trouble. That’s why everyone carries them on the hip. Easy to draw and sheath.

Press x to doubt. He could’ve done anal.

Reverse grip has no value. That weeb shit doesn’t work irl. Anyone who’s ever held a knife would know.

So that’s why Biden can’t complete a full sentence properly. He’s been seeing shit huh?

Despite writing 4 different Novels and updating. Much thanks for the chapter.