Chinese really? It's Japanese people that eat raw fish.

It's a wish fulfilment story frankly because it can't possibly be anything else. Story should have just focused on what readers wanted, probably the oshi no no was the most interesting plot point with his children also being reincarnators. If this wasn't a reincarnators novel well... As the author points out he really didn't intend to be a fate universe and it really shows. Theres a fundamental ignorance if what a magus is. Should have stuck to some generic DxD universe.

Might want to buy the idol company.

Sorry with no instructor, sparring partner, or real world experience his training isn't worth much.

Are you trying to make him an Achilles?

Why did you give.him so much stuff? A soldier and materia would put him at a solid top of Orario.

I think the initial premise had potential then it became apparent we were getting a rerun of mahouka with a new third wheel. If MC wants to have a low profile he should show some initiative doing so, instead of the plot constantly dragging him along.

Umm, yes there are repercussions for killing civilians...

He's going to need someone to train him. Preferably before he ends up developing a lot of bad habits.

I'd focus on making a comedy or slice of life genre. Avoid drawing out battle scenes or levelling focus. With these kind of stats any kind of battle is pointless.

The setting is kind of wonky, his weird power level and his attitude. Would have been a lot easier to write it off as a pure reincarnation starting back as level 1 with some exclusive xanxia perks trees.

Does his creations scale with level? Because if not he is in for a rough time. Everything scales vertically hard in danmachi. Also his no melee philosophy frankly naive. I hope he realizes he cant just half-ass the dungeon. On another note I like the idea of joining an new familia as a newbie is basically a death sentence. With no support structure, he might get past the goblins. Since it seems even normal citizens can kill them. But then the newbie are going to hit the ceiling hard with the stronger monsters on the mid-level floors.

He probably needs some formal training.

Always found it funny when people put another system in a world that already has one.

Haha lantern tried to mess with a cultivator. Cultivation is a ruthless business. Backstabbing, scheming, assasination, sabotage is elementary in a cultivation society.

So basically yukari yakumo?

Theres not much subtlety in the writing. Mc is kind of a sociopath, feels awfully flat at times, but the characters do feel internally consistent with their background. Pacing is good so far, but story feels like a reading a speed run to the endgame level cap. Good thing the author left out systems , ROB , and non cannon crossovers.

It really did feel edgelordy. Personally when someone I wasn't too close with died I remember feeling somewhat amused about the whole situation. A little surprised and out of place. Personally I think most people would be given a third of inheritance away, simply because of rumors spreading about being a cheapskate. Also gives them an excuse to leave the house, or he could move out instead. The way he handled it was really immature and unprofessional.

You might want to do some cursory research into start up founding. Maybe look for seed money for investors, networking, renting out hardware, patenting etc. For chizuru maybe some small skits on youtube or nico nico, to build a fanbase and maybe negotiate some adspace when you hit it big.

Was this necessary? I mean isn't being Zuckerberg and Bill Gates enough.