i promise i'll update ^^'
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I like the concept of this novel and after reading the first few chapters, I think the execution has been great. There could be some work on editing overall, with grammar and so on but it isn't a big deal since everything is easy to understand. I'm excited to learn more about the characters and can't wait for more chapters!
me too! i would add the dead fish meme in the story but it would ruin the immersion lol, i'm glad you kept up with my story even tho i hadn't updated in a week basically 😭😭
I've read a few chapters of this novel and I like it, the characters are clear and the motivations are well written. I think the writing could be improved in the grammar and spelling departments but that can just be edited when the author has time. Overall it's another genre stable, I enjoy the themes and I'm looking forward to how the author will take it going forward!
thank you! i'm glad you enjoyed it, there will be more updates to come, and more arcs with different settings! 💞
I love this novel! It makes me want to root for the couple because their relationship seems so adorable, they have a good understanding of one another and I'm jellyy. Where's my one in a lifetime blooming romance, truck-kun where are you?? Isekai me now! I can't take it anymore 😩 The writing is clear and the transitions are smooth, I love the descriptions and the characterization. I think the author has both heart and talent and I will be waiting for more updates! <3
i am waiting patiently for the cute fluffy romance, the prologue hyped me up but Keira isn't interacting with her lover, i'm impatient for the sugarrr 😩
god, she's so hot 😫🔥, step on me mamacita
don't be seduced comrade! the revolution must continue, down with the monarchy!
would they be immediately killed if they plugged their ears? 👀 how about secretly, convertly?
thank you!! honestly this chapter has been rewritten at least 3 times, so it was going through a lot 😭