loving to read. that's all. Thank you for your hard work.
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I ve tried to look for other translations and only found one. It is horrendous and badly done. plz continu !
Really ?!?! you should keep on and let readers chose which one is better!!
hatsu seem fine and pretty original. May be you need time to adapt. Otherwise choose a more general ability. Like space control. Where he would begin with very little mastery over his ability then progress through your story.
An update plzzzzz !!!!
It isn't really clear how they can find him everytime
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I agréé with the edit. I don t think it added anything interesting.
it get colder until it get hotter. I think the lower is 10 km After that it begin to get hotter.
Really good story. Original idea about cyberpunk. Plz go on !