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It started off good, but mid story the mc started losing brain cells, the mc started forgiving betrayals multiple times simply because they’re his friends and they’re also females, he could’ve solve a lot of problems early on but he’s too in love and stupid, the author also drags the drama wayyy too long, and it just gets frustrating with the mc being a simp and dumb, also never even think about buying the P.A.T.R.E.O.N, chapters might seem a lot but 10 chapters is basically 1 chapter, nothing happens, just drama veing dragged for no reason.
Why did u have to recognise me😭 I don’t know tbh, I’m stuck and ran out of ideas, I’ve been reading a lot to gain inspiration and I’m starting to have new ideas, so maybe soon I’ll continue writing
Nah you’re doing good, just my own preference, thanks for the hard work!
And your grammar/vocabulary says you’re not that different from him
Might be my favourite minecraft ff yet, everything’s good but imagine if he has the ALL The Mods mod or CrazyCraft mod, he’d be op as hell, he can behead Thanos with Big Bertha or even The Royal Guardian Sword, and don’t even get me started on Allthemodium armor to Unobtanium Armor with Hopology enchants, but this is already good, you’re doing great Author! Thanks for this book
You cooked him too much, give him some water to cooldown
If there’s people who likes this story, they should be on the watch lists, them mtfs prolly likes kids
Sorry, no my work this week has increased I couldn’t even go in my phone, I should be able to upload next week on my off
Should pick up in a couple of chapters, but I guarantee at least 1000 word count every chapter, not every letter, every word
We on a family road trip, basically travelling Australia, although getting chase by the coppers sounds cool