HellDaoist12

Great work! Keep it up! Have great premises while it was somewhat slow paced but I like how it builds up! It's like we follow the character's journey from the MC was a child and slowly growing, of course, there were some time skips that helped in advancing the story much faster!

Since it's Tang12 automatically 5 stars, the premise is good for chp 1 and 2, not much can be seen for where the story direction will be it remains to be seen, for world-building since it's parallel Earth similar to our Earth it's already very much built with some tweaks from the author in the future, and lastly the writing is more engaging (at least in my opinion) than the author ROTK and Fallout 4 novel which was a massive improvement In my eyes, maybe it's because the author tries to change how he hold the characters conversation. I hope the author continues this novel because it was very interesting and makes me want to read more, of course no pressure intended with him already making 2 novels at the same time.

I like it really, even though there's something that could be said to be out of the logic, but considering there could be a parallel earth maybe the people there appreciate geniuses more and don't question some of their decisions, at least for me it's interesting and good that you fast pace his early life like that bcus let be real I would be bored to death if in 5 chapters if the mc hadn't reached teenage years yet lol

An interesting premise and one I would like to see, maybe you could put the name of the character that talks like which is Alessandro and which is the boss, etc to not confuse readers, as for the rest I think for a first chapter it hooked me up, and for the gifts he requested are good ones not great but I think good for a wrestling premise

Well that's a good new for us readers if you ask me

Since it was Tang12 who made it, I believe it would be a great piece of work just like his other work! The world-building is definitely already perfect as it was based on Fallout 4, for other things I can't see but I believe it would be great! Keep up the spirit author!

What a touching tribute to your friend! A Fallout Novel is a good one! A great start to a new novel, but I'm relieved that your ROTK novel are still your main focus!

Yes!