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It's nice to have a POV to understand what they think. But at this point your story is more about the game itself than the protagonist making game. I think you should limit the POVs to the game highlight.
Isn't it normal to be subdued when surrounded by people than can squash you like a bug ? What do you mean he as a timid demeanor... Like, do you expect him to strut like a peacock ?
if you make a harem make it a one woman per world max please.
Super thanks for the chapters. Hope to see you soon.
It’s your story. Do what make you feel happy writing. Youcan’t please everyone.
Dude... Do you even know the meaning of the word ’friend’ ? Are you mistaking it with the word ’stranger’ ?
People will always read and like good stuff. Get used to it ;)
Since when Tang San was looking down on him ? As far as I know they didn't interact aside from the first day at school where MC ignored him XD Did I miss like... 10 chapters or something ?
The harem tag is literally in the story description. I don't know what to tell you.
no idea. Don’t want to right now.