HeavnlyImmortal

Overall really good with alot of potential. I especially like that rather than abusing meta decks and cobbling some abomination that TKO's every time the author is going out of the way to think of cards and decks for the story

I might be wrong but i'm pretty sure in canon both xiao and hao met tang sans mother together while traveling and both fell for her, though there wasn't much said about it beyond that and we all know how it ended.

Good story, but ive got some major complaints about how the story jumps around as if the author lost track of where he was when writing it, entire chapters seems to be missing sometimes, and whole sections of chapters are just repeats from the previous one.

It occured to me reading this that this is supposed to be shortly after roger died, like 3-4 years at this point if i remember the time skips right and I looked up to make sure but sadi is only 21 when Luffy first breaks into impel down to rescue Ace, so at this point in time sadi would have just been born or was like 1 at max since one piece starts roughly 24 years after Rogers death.

Hello editor, i think ya missed a spot.

a little bit of editing as I reread through before writing ch 8 but I don't think I explicitly changed anything. Did I miss something?

I'm absolutely sure this dice is a reference to Lord of the mysteries

Probably ran out of novels they could pick up cheap so their seeing if there were old ones people want to see get finished being translated

*Slaps head* Listen to Uncle, Magic must defeat Magic.

anyone know why the quality has been dropping since about ch 68-69 I think.