Cromir

Very bad translation. With little proper editing the story would be much more enjoyable. Story on its own is fine.

Diamond 12 chapters in..................

As the edit of the story was good so far. I was hoping we would not get this cringe keep it secret and get mc explaining roxxy properly that he has abilities that are not normal and she should help him keep them secret in one go instead of repeating. "keep it secret."

well written, lot of character interactions, not a power trip.

Thank you. Both endings were pure diamonds.

I think it would be better with single reincarnation instead of chain of them. Instead of starting from begining start from an major event. Tell the mc background with many small flashbacks to the past. use flashbacks also guide readers to understand how MC came to conclusions in whatever situation he is in. occasionaly. I think this was how this was writen before and for me it worked lot better than this newly written start.

How do Marines know who imprisoned Croc? I dont recall anyone telling their name while reporting it. Dont think marines have power to force rulers of Alabasta to tell anything if they dont want to. Dead men tell no tales. Many questions i cant recall them being answered. If i missed the explanation from previous chapters, I ask your forgivness for my short memory.

Thanks for the chapter. Awesome work so far.

I have no love for murderers and even less for characters who let them go free from punishment. For me enjoyment of this fanfic dropped to near 0. Will check couple new chapters after this but might stop reading if i dont find any enjoyment from them.

Thank god.