Shankzz

as much as I love this story his 2nd world jump also has a time displacement, error or interference, a scattering his party. is just lame and frankly if the world jump is this unreliable he should quit using it till he can travel on his own cause his systems travel is like Russian roulette

just how is exposing himself to a godking staying low profile on the divine side?

Please continue this fic my only request is to have Ah Yin, and Xu Wu to refine the heartbreak herbs so that their cover aren't blown like Wu's did in cannon. I hated that cliche.

I'm completely agree to remove tang San from the story. my 2 suggestions for human girls are zhu zhuqing (cause her family and fiance are garbage the right herb cam evolve her soul to an article cat), and shu binger for obvious reason. Please continue this fic even if it's been 2 years since updating

Please stop Xiao Yan and expel him with out harming the clan lives there and zu is an elder how heartless can Xiao Yan be it's to much

I'm loving this story but I'm starting to lose interest due tang San plot armor it's one thing to keep him alive. it's another when you make sure he gets away with everything he wants with no consequences especially in the divine realm were god are supposed to be restricted from mortals. bingers stuff was set up while she was mortal. so please reduce you Tang San bias when doing anything not directly involving the MC

his response to plot armor had just about die laughing

amazing as always please make him heal normally or at least 100 days divine realm time so when he comes back soul land will be completely dragon nest domain that suppress other God's this is soul land 2 he is support cast not protagonists so no plot armor

I enjoy most of this the only issue is the inconsistent system multiple girls gave no reward at all. Including the main female lead from cannon our bunny princess, yu lingling, Yan Yan, the 2 girl who helped him. with the silver dragon king, or A Wu. that's A lot of failures on your system if you could clean that up then that would be amazing cause at the moment it makes the system seem lazy and half hearted

I like most of your stories so even with great doubt I'll read a bit more and hope you don't push gluttony very much cause instinctive uncontrolled hunger character tend to be garbage people or twilight rip off neither a good for stories