JernSure

I have read up to 441 and the story quickly takes a nose dive. the genders of characters are constantly being changed, names of prominent characters get botched. But the worse of it all, the story just plummets. I like how the story unfolded up to these last 100 chaps I've read. The novel being modern society with cultivation was fantastic. Li Jing being a patroller was my favorite part of the story because it felt very detective noir. Now though he won't be able to stay in the blue star world and has to ascend to what is described as a lawless lower divine realm. That is not modern. The blue star realm was hardly explored. Various factions could have had very interesting story arcs. Now at best we will get a rushed story where he quickly goes around solves world problems in a rushed couple chapter adventure. extremely disappointed with how the novel has transpired.

how do the names keep getting messed up extremely disappointing

I have read to 174 and the biggest problem to me if disregarding other issues. Is that its called the innkeeper but drops all class and grandeur of being this mysterious inn to becoming a random Hilton hotel with lazy rivers. How did it go from an inn to hey look at this 40 story hotel, gaming store, barber shop, trees, lazy river, lake, coliseum, oh here's the inn.

I really do like this novel I was hooked chapter 1 but the pacing feels wicked fast. I looked forward to the school setting in the beginning and it felt like 2 chapters later that was flew past with nothing interesting happening. by chapter 100 there has been no substantial arc of any kind just boatloads of new things happening chapter after chapter. I really hope the pacing can be worked on for later chapters

I just can't bring myself to like this. I liked the description and the idea of it. But there is a limit to things and the mc is just downright dumb. Avoiding the face-slapping trope is fine but making the mc a pushover because the world is easy and he "never saw the bad side" is not good writing. Does not help when I read the author's review saying one arc is really bad and that's why so many chapters are unlocked. It's hard to bring oneself to put so much time into reading when it's going to get worse before it gets better.

so within a few chapters the cool immune to sun ability is null because sunscreen.

I dont really understand a lot of the reviews on this novel Its an absolute slog to read through, the development of the characters is non existent after 200 chapters. I think the author has a great world but needs to work on characters. The reviews about no cliches and originality are just not true either. The echoes and memories are just like super gene. The shadow ability reminds me of shadow hack, unsealing emptiness, and solo leveling while still having some originality to it atleast. Overall though I just cant find myself recommending this to anyone, especially trying to claim its one of the best novels on this app is just insulting to the novels that have that title. I do wish the author all the best, definitely has a talent in writing or the world background wouldn't be so good.

this wasn't needed though. The dark race has been tossed aside. He never even fully explored the other side. they have been building the danger from hundreds of chaps on the dark race. Then within a couple chaps bam aliens, space travel, invasion. Finish a plot the dark race was actually interesting.

little bit confused, every other time he died he goes into his god modes this time he doesn't?

I have always loved mylittlebrothers novels. My biggest concern is the commitment to them. Dual cultivation is 1k chaps in not finished but the auther moved onto cultivation online which hit 1k chaps and now here is a 3rd novel. I'm worried about investing into these novels and never seeing their endings.