Ordinary guy who likes to read fantasy novels
of reading
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Read books
or Kala
Kala-snikov
The first 2 sentences can make someone think they've doing it in for 2 days. Same goes for the sound at the top
Start of the story seems fine for me... But need extra reading to know whether is worth or not. Need to study the raw since it seemed it is dropped.
What about the lightning girl???