Frostkiller

i gave it a average score because it revise fanfic base on 开局制作精灵游戏：主播玩疯了 but i like how you did i hope you continue the work and add more of you idea in the novel cause i read the original it went bad due to some nationalism stuff so i hope you continue this cause i m immerse reading it

ive read it at first like it kinda generic Chinese fanfic when mc tried to justify why he change the names of the MC of the "Your Name" i kind of like it but he proceed to justify more like he stated that it originated from China then i kind of felt its too generic with nationalism involved i gave the world background 2 and character design a 1 star story development 3 the rest is 5 stars its good if your not to sensitive about nationalism i kind stop reading in chapter 20 so im not sure about my score i just felt its too generic of a Chinese fanfic so like promoting Chinese culture even though it doesn't matter in the story every work he use he would insert a Chinese fact even though it isnt part of the story well i felt it is worth to try its not a racist fanfic but i just read wuxia fanfic and i kind of sensitive to it, long story short a try