HeavenlyGrandmist

Cringy for the way he acts…. in a sense a person Who is reborn(already lived a hard LiFe in past)and parents dead..plus trained in lone godforsaken place to a sage level by a lone sage…would expect to have some serious and mature side to him….fights Are okay but could be better if as a skilled sage he would have more mana control or something of that sort…anyway if you are keeping them for later and develop slowly…that is fine too but a bit more mature in the way he acts would be a upside…just a suggestion fom my Point of view…others might like it…either way your novel you should write it as you see fit…as reader we will always be critics…

I aM sure with his powers he will easily get wiped out….though it started as op ‘sage’….His fights are all Too cringy….two spells…and then ‘hufF’….Seriously!!!

Translation looks like mtl...if improved could be an average novel .........................................................................

Amazing novel!! Author should pump more chapters. Pretty detailed world building and characters. MC is Written in a very balanced way showing both his struggles and fortunes. I hope he writes it to the end unlike many other originals.