White_Clown

how about set MC's race as half-mink. As electrician, he can maximize advantage of Mink's electricity and his devil fruit can allow him to use and control Sulong mode even without Moon

wish the harem is Norn and Aisha. Their first meet is great castratope, suddenly they're show up in front him

how about make it as subspecies of twice critical. It's form as a sword (let's call it as Critical Edge) and that triple the power of the user.

first spirit ring [Strom Flash]. Ability: accelerate himself, true value is gathering momentum and electricity. weakness: since he move so fast, he'll get a greater damage if someone can destroy his momentum or hit him.

wait, don't it immosible to rise in 10 level just one year?

though that fruit is not directly strengthen him, it'll expand his option greatly and also make him can save people better. And when after eat devil fruit, use seastone when he train.

make some story about battle of Akainu vs Aokoji and also Hachinosu's incident if you can please

if giving him paramecian type devil fruit, I think Fuwa-Fuwa no Mi or Wapu-Wapu no Mi is best for him

"No matter how many allies you have around you, when you die, you'll be alone." Gojo Satoru

and suggest. How about make MC to use Nen's training as the reference to control spirit power. [Hunter x Hunter]