Randomguy791

i believe he is going for the elite four title, not champion. using champion for both is somewhat confusing

current koshien should be summer? and ichidaisan was eliminated by yakushi if i remember correctly. How would they make it to koshien? unless you mean previous spring koshien

you just used taels 3 lines ago. now you are using ryo? author, you should edit this to keep currency names consistent and less confusing

taels is quite confusing since the ninja world uses ryo

shout is quite a weird name honestly. what kinda parents names their child "shout"...

the m an has recognized mount tai. not bad

pikachu is the true protagonist. ash is just the sidekick lmaooo

salamence is a gen 3 pokemon from ruby/sapphire

or maybe go the fossil route instead if this is before canon. use what he knows to find fossils and revive them and have the family gym specialize in that to be unique.

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