Rouwhorstn

What’s the point of including this? It just dis reacted fro the story and draws itnoutm

Story is well written and is event overall. My biggest complaint would be that the story jumps arounds too much. Thought I think this is the author just being inexperienced. Or maybe there’s a grand plan that just couldn’t be connected fast enough. I dont like how the story painted a terrible situation due to being powerless & then just ingores it like. The kid gets beat up on a regular basis so why doesn’t it warp his character?

Story is good and is sent up to really develop in the future, however I’m 35 chaps in and the mc isn’t using his reincarnated advantages. Like I get that he’s 5 yr old but he should be trying to do more. ie read, sign contracts, etc

Yeah this is starting to get boring. The MC is to OP and is kinda stupid on his approch. He wasted months of time doing nothing and now just is doinngg go quests? Where’ s his drive or ambition.

Getting tired of this dogeun arc. It feels like he’s been diving for like 80ish chapters.

Very slow speed and characters are very 1 demensional. Author is witty, which is great but the story doesn’t progress. The world building sucks. The setting is the middle of a galactic war in the future, which isn’t congruent with what the MC experiences. He experiences a bunch of cliches from bullying which isnt congruent with the seriousness of a war.

Not sure if your changing your writing style or just trying to meet a daily quota but I don’t like how you’ve slowed down the novel. Scenes tend to stretch over multiple chaps and it feels like a lot more fluff is being added… can you go back to the old style?

Honestly a bit disappointed with this novel. its pretty good without grammer error and such… but its way to slow paced. I’m nearly 100 chaps in and the mc doesnt have and real necomany skills or something that would tie to the stars. Which isnt what i expected when reading the title, intro, or even the first few chaps. the MCs just a martial artist with some unque aspects.

Great story and even better kingdom/world building. I love how detailed the story gets when it comes to building and the pace is perfect. the mc isn’t OP so it much more realistic. Unfortunatey that also means there’s nothing unique about the MC - no intro of advanced tech, no cleverness - and as a result makes the story monotonous after a while.

Very much a slice of life novel Up to chap 90…. is that going to change? Mc has no direction at all and doesnt even seem to be concerned with getting energy