StellarJade

General?? Colonel?? Marshal?? These are not Marine ranks. This is obviously a bad translation. Any excuse you make is invalid due to needing only 10sec to find the proper ranks with a google search.

It would be nice if you could stop breaking up the text like this.

What is with, the broken text, like why is this chapter's text so bad??

I figured out where you messed up. The STATE OF NEW YORK had a budget of around $80 Billion, but the NYPD only had a budget of around $6 Billion. Easy to understand mistake 👍 Now if we could just figure out the inherent racism this story would be better.

'Thoughts' "Speech" 'Thoughts' "Speech" 'Thoughts' "Speech" 'Thoughts' "Speech" 'Thoughts' "Speech" 'Thoughts' "Speech" 'Thoughts' "Speech"

That's not Minerva, that's Maggie Smith the actress.

But that's not the best part. The author has put up a poll, on their patreon, that you can only vote on after paying the author. Meaning, the people most likely to vote that they are totally fine with the latest "additions" to the story are those that are subscribed to his patreon. That is some scumlord stuff right there.

Yet another fanfiction where the author/translator cannot tell the difference between 'Thought' and "Speech".

I don't like how the MC is revealing everything about his system infront of Sasuke. It doesn't make any sense. 'Thought' "Speech". MC never thinks, he only talks out loud.

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