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salark is pregnant so that ranking needs to change :)

thank you :)

Quite a good point, thank you :)

Thank you for your review and I'm glad you've liked the story up to that point. I also appreciate the criticism and will keep it in mind for future chapters (30+) :)

Well i must say, I've seen many reincarnation stories so I was surprised to actually see such a good one. The writing is superb, hardly any notable flaws the vivid descriptions and the perfect narration make you feel you are watching a movie rather than reading a story the author also causes unimaginable pain with the suspense but a good kind :) I quite also enjoy the type of comedy that is used here. please write more :)

Thanks :)

The main idea of the story has potential and I believe there are many things that will be revealed in the future. A lot is also revealed about the world setting so you won’t be stuck in a mist like veil with almost every other character in the story knowing more than you. The narration is also quite unique, the over convoluted sentences that plague many other novels, making you skip paragraphs have little presence in this story. I don’t want to spoil so I’ll just say the first few chapters are full of surprises :)

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

😅 it's not like i put him through this just for the kick of it, there are reasons that you'll find out about in future chapters. though I can say he will go through alot, it won't happen with such intensity for a while :)