Just a reader of novels though I'm now also trying to write...
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When did he have a backpack? Or is this his storage space? Also when did he get any flashlights?
True. Still planning long term isn't a bad idea. Also considering the magical elements perhaps he could acquire some kind of animal den that acts as a spawner?
Capitalist and evil are not synonymous. Anything can be good or bad depending on the choices and actions of the individual(s)
Sexist
He's stupid. Don't make it easier for others to kill you by poisoning yourself.
Ah. A professional trol... er critic. A professional critic.
Many synthetics are plant based. I realize the author is trying to just set the stage but their understanding and reasoning are flawed.
Sex doesn't make a man 'real'. Plenty of guys are scum who have lost their virginity.
Not looting?
What? You're only now realizing you have a job?