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shadowfox9801

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2017-08-08 เข้าร่วมแล้วUnited States
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    openents >opponents

    "Don't rule out the others yet; you never know. Maybe the Demon was just lucky with the level of openents he has gotten so far. He could just be lucky with this whole thing."
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    break > bread

    In the Light Faction world, what happened to those that were unable to do anything but were forced to steal break to feed their starving family. Because they didn't follow the rules, and simply fought for their survival would they be executed as well.
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    sharply > hardly

    It was the same on both hands, a strange weapon that was sharply used in fighting, if anything, it appeared as if it was something custom.
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    pagan > pagna

    Loud cheers erupted again as the mirrors displayed everything. For a moment, it didn't feel like they were watching a fight, but an intense drama that was going on in the Pagan warrior world.
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    pagan > pagna

    Those that were Pagan warriors knew this even more so, and for those that were lower ranking, the Clan heads were treated like royalty. No one would dare go up against them.
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    pagan > pagna

    The regular citizens always lived in fear that they might disrespect a simple Pagan warrior and lose their life over it. Many, if they knew a Clan head was coming to visit, would just stay indoors for fear of angering a certain individual.
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    high as the sun in the sky?

    "You should know, we don't take part in these things because there is a large difference between me and you. Right now, you might think that you are as high as the sky in the high, but you should know that Heaven exists above that sky."
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    not a problem. I've seen the spelling in books before and looked it up about 10 years ago, just to make sure it wasn't a typo that editors missed.

    Off to the side of the city, there was an area that was sectioned off. It was a coliseum of sorts. Once an area frequently used by the Moon Shield Clan, and was once the area where one of the martial arts tournaments was held.
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    ตอบกลับถึง The_archer1202

    he's one of the Grand Magus...

    "If you had, it's possible that the news could have spread to someone that Idore or the Noble Guild knew. Right now, while he thinks your memory has been removed, it's best to make our move."
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    Coliseum and colosseum are both common spellings of the word referring to (1) the famous Roman amphitheater built in the first century A.D., and (2) any large amphitheater used for sports or other public events. Neither spelling is considered wrong in either use, but while the forms are often used interchangeably, the famous structure in Rome is now usually spelled Colosseum, and coliseum is generally reserved for other uses. Exceptions are easily found, however, and there is no consensus evident in popular usage.

    Off to the side of the city, there was an area that was sectioned off. It was a coliseum of sorts. Once an area frequently used by the Moon Shield Clan, and was once the area where one of the martial arts tournaments was held.
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    did it > did hit*

    Using his sword this time, it was as if he knew it wouldn't stop the attack, so he swung it. The attacks the sword did it, it managed to stop them, but the sheer amount of attacks Raze has swung it was impossible to stop them all.
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    he's the "old man sitting down"

    "I know what you're thinking," Bargo, the plump man, said, sitting down. "But even if they are lucky, they have still passed. So let them through. Besides, I'm sure you have more than this planned."
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    along > among *

    "In the past, there seems to have been similar cases along Clans. They have attempted things with items and rituals, trying to get those from the Divine realm to come down.
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    portions > potions *

    "They just do what is intended to do with the materials that have been used. Enough power is drawn from them, but this isn't the case when items or portions are enchanted with Dark Magic."
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    they probably changed the token after the incident at the dark academy to stop Raze from escaping to another faction.

    "Captain, you let them through… even though those were…"
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    at Repton*

    It wasn't particularly news that Raze wanted to hear. When Raze had arrived at the Repton he had asked the Crimson Crane for a couple more favors.
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    remember your part*

    "Remember part of the deal," Raze said. "I'm sending you back and out of this place, and you promise to do what you can to protect them."
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    would lose out > wouldn't lose out* thank you for making me double-check as I forgot there were 2 copies of the word lol

    The thing was, Gary had gotten a boost from the Altered that day, far more than he would have gotten from the beasts that had their crystal removed. So honestly, unlike before, he didn’t feel like he would lose out too much if he stopped attending. Nevertheless, he would still have his debut match to become a proper AFC fighter.
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    and yet this reply proves my correction to be valid.

    "But you, young child, after watching you for so long, and seeing what you just did. You are able to perform both correctly, you have a magic core and a dantian," Amir stated.
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    if you read the paragraph properly, he is talking about using them both at the same time. hence my correction.

    "But you, young child, after watching you for so long, and seeing what you just did. You are able to perform both correctly, you have a magic core and a dantian," Amir stated.
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