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Twilight : Justice for Jacob

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อ่านนิยาย Twilight : Justice for Jacob โดย ผู้เขียน The3Entities ที่เผยแพร่บน WebNovel.A primordial entity who is a fan of human creations has decided to create an alternative reality to correct certain mistakes made in the writing of his favorite secondary characters. Here he will try ...

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A primordial entity who is a fan of human creations has decided to create an alternative reality to correct certain mistakes made in the writing of his favorite secondary characters. Here he will try to create a different Jacob from the pitiful puppy of the original films to give him the direction that he deserves. I don't own any main characters from this franchise except two or three characters that I'm going to create. The cover picture is not mine and I hope the author doesn't come after me and kill me for borrowing it. This fanfiction is an English version of the one posted on my second account which is unfortunately inaccessible now. English is not my first language so there will definitely be syntactic mistakes so bear with me. Do not hesitate to give your opinions in comments

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There was no pain, no light, and no darkness. There was simply nothing. It was as if my mind had been placed in a catatonic state; no breath to be drawn and no words left to utter. Here I woke in a strange place unknown to me and here I sit in the cold presence of an odd man who appeared no older that forty at most. The room we were in was stark white with no decor on the walls, a barren scene devoid of anything. The gentleman across the table didn’t appear to be anyone out of the ordinary from first glance. He wore an all black suit with a skull shaped lapel pin on the left side of his jacket. His neatly combed black hair and clean shaven face suggested that he was rather well kept and he put off a presence that could penetrate the foundations of any soul. I looked into his eyes and saw a void of pure despair. At that point there was no guessing who he was because I had already felt this chilling aura before, but there was now a face to place to it. “Dylan Cinder, you are dead. The act in which you used to commit your suicide was rather amusing, but even so it appears that you have succeeded in your plot to leave the mortal realm”, Death spoke. His cold blackened face offered no sympathy as he informed me of events that transpired, in my mind, eons ago. I wanted to ask about the events that led to me sitting in this peculiar room discussing the topic of my fickle mortal state with death, but I found myself unable to speak. There were no words I could muster to talk to such a being. “Lucky, or quite possibly not for you, the big man thought it would be a waste to let you off the hook so easy. You will be enlisted in the Death Corpse Program and alongside the other new recruits be trained to act as Grim Reapers”. He had a queer look on his face that suggested he may not have been entirely thrilled about my inclusion in this project, but either way it didn’t seem like he had much of a choice. “Of course you can decline the position, but that means you’ll take your chances with the judge and by the looks of how you went out, going down seems very likely. I mean for the love of it all, you slid down a children’s slide off the side of a 300 story building after screaming sui-slide at the top of your lungs”. A wry smile crept across Death’s face because he knew that their really was only one choice. “Sure, let’s give this reaper thing a go”, I thought to myself. I mean given the choice between eternal damnation and a new job, I guess I’ll lean towards the new position. “Seems like you have made up your mind, so sign this contract and we can get on with this process” he sighed. A golden scroll with blood red writing suddenly appeared on the table. It clearly read that in exchange for a thousand years of service to the Death Corpse, I would be free from the judgment of my mortal transgressions. I moved to pick up the contract to examine it closer. My finger slipped and caught the corner of the page by accident and cut my finger open, but instead of blood, a black fluid emerged from the wound and landed in the parchment. “The contract is signed” he said. Suddenly the room went black and the man was gone. My cloths that I was wearing disappeared from my body and had been replaced by what looked like a replica of the suit the gentleman had been wearing, minus the lapel pin strangely enough. A voice suddenly played in my head, a strange sound I had never heard before, almost like some sort of angelic woman directly transmitting thoughts into my mind. “Reaper Corpse Trainee Form Gained. Welcome to the Corpse” the voice rang out. A shocking experience to be sure, but it seemed like it was attached to the contract that I had just signed, so I didn’t pay it to much heed. The black room started to change again, slowly twisting the dimension until it finally cracked. There was a bright flash of light and a loud crashing sound. When the light faded slightly, I found my feet upon solid ground. “Welcome to the Academy”.

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TheHandOfAuthor
TheHandOfAuthorLv4TheHandOfAuthor

Good one, but I demand Justice for Grammar...

BIG_BAD_WOLF2000
BIG_BAD_WOLF2000Lv2BIG_BAD_WOLF2000

From one author to another, you have my appreciation. Short but fulfilling, well executed, not boring at all, keep writing you are a natural, you should also do an original story.

TheQueen_foxy_270
TheQueen_foxy_270Lv4TheQueen_foxy_270

loved tge book.one of my favourite twilight novels ❤️thanks, author. great work.👍

Hellcat1963
Hellcat1963Lv14Hellcat1963

Absolutely love this fanfic.❤️ Keep up the great work.

ForeVver
ForeVverLv3ForeVver

Vamos lá, a história é boa se você ignorar as inconsistências da trama, mas tirando isso é muito bom para uma leitura rápida.

cluelessauthor
cluelessauthorLv15cluelessauthor

another fantastic story, just wow. characters, suspense, twists all somehow crammed into 20 chapters. this story is an excelent read even if you don't love the twilight franchise

SHCH7
SHCH7Lv1SHCH7

So he remains a simp, always jumping hoops for Bella and the Cullens. Loses the girl he loves twice. Fights his brothers for the Cullens, and still imprints on Renesmee.... He's an even bigger simp than canon.

Novel_Lover_2360
Novel_Lover_2360Lv3Novel_Lover_2360

This was amazing ❤️🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥.....

Kaheem_Edmonds
Kaheem_EdmondsLv4Kaheem_Edmonds

this was very good and I like the Danielle girl and the fact Seth and found love for change

InfinityWolfS2
InfinityWolfS2Lv2InfinityWolfS2

Gostei muito do livro, foi uma nova experiencia. Não existe muitos livros que seja continuado igual ao desse autor Espero que continue com o magnifico trabalho, e continue a melhorar cada dia mais.

LastGod
LastGodLv4LastGod

absolutely unreadable dialog. makes no sense sound like AI. the idea is good but he sitll seem like hes simping for bella.

raiinz
raiinzLv13raiinz

My Respect i think that was one of the best Twilight fan-fics that i have read and i have read many so Readers Twilight Lover WHO want a different end for Jacob read this it May Not be for all people but many will Love it

S1LV3RS
S1LV3RSLv4S1LV3RS

ughhhh, the kind of story goes.with script-pt like format. and more talking less doing, cant work.my imagination throughly, though writings are alright, characters.show.emotion... just.that it lacks details... bit still.its.good though

marawa
marawaLv2marawa

Thanks for the story. ......................................... I enjoy it!! ......................................... Eternity is the End! Love it!

The_Jonbergdahl
The_JonbergdahlLv14The_Jonbergdahl

i really love this book Thank you for posting it

Radek_Zawadzki
Radek_ZawadzkiLv1Radek_Zawadzki

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