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The Sanctuary of the Abyss

นักเขียน: NightClouds
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What is The Sanctuary of the Abyss

อ่านนิยาย The Sanctuary of the Abyss โดย ผู้เขียน NightClouds ที่เผยแพร่บน WebNovel.Welcome to the world where mystical powers are a normality. If fortunate enough, one can possess either magical or holy power, but never both, for the two powers contradict each other. Norah Lumen is ...

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Welcome to the world where mystical powers are a normality. If fortunate enough, one can possess either magical or holy power, but never both, for the two powers contradict each other. Norah Lumen is the youngest professor at the Imperial College of Magic. He is the sole anomaly, with a body perfect for magic and immune from the common weakness of holy power. He has the potential to be the greatest mage in the world, dominating over everyone with no equal. So what shall he do? Take over the world? Create a harem? Gather a cult following? Sorry, but he can't use magic even though his body is meant to. !!! Follow along as we slowly unravel this young man's secrets and figure out his unknown intentions.

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The rise of a Queen

" You don't believe me? Well and good. Let's end our ties here.", Xu Xi Feng said to her family who distrusted her when she was a victim. "Why don't we get married?",She asked after a deep thought when she get the trust and support from an outsider. " Remember, I only enter a relationship that last for. a life time", He said and they married in a traditional way. " My business had gone bankrupt", he proclaimed. She took out her savings and they started from scratch. When the government announced that she was dead in a well staged accident, he believed that there is something wrong with her sudden disappearance. For six months he kept on searching for her,until a day,his assistant brings in a news about the new queen who is gonna ascend the throne of Nan Jiang under the name Xiu Xi Feng. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------- She, Xu Xi Feng, was a girl from a family with a normal background. She was not valued for who she was just because she was born a woman. She ignored everything else because What she values in a relationship was Companionship, co dependence and trustworthy. When her own family didn't give her these three, she got them from a stranger who came into her life when she was at the lowest and nature takes its course. Throughout the journey for the rest of her life, she experienced everything from betrayal to unconditional love. This book can be considered as a prequel for my other ongoing book " The Queen is a D-listed actress". And please be patient with my update schedule.

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For the first time, I understood what good pacing was. Reading the beginning of Dexter's story, I felt the author's ability to align our pace with their's was alight. I love everything about this novel thus far and can't wait to read more!

Princess_debbs26
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Great story author! The book has a lot of potentials. The synopsis is catchy. The introduction of the MC is also awesome. I look forward to Dexter's story. The author has put in great efforts in this book

kuhaku_sora
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Great introductions! And I'm loving it already~ The writing is smooth enough to carry me onto the next chapter of Dexter's stories! I commented down everything that I think needs editting. To sum it up, you could include more "showing" than "telling" especially how much pain Dexter had gone through, how it burns his flesh, and so on. You could also reduce the usage of adverbs and use more active verbs to amplify the descriptions of the story. Besides that, I know this novel is going to be an awesome book in the future!

Venusean
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As of now, the novel has just commenced serialization and 4 chapters have been published. However, in these 4 chapters, I could very well see that the story has a lot of potential and the author has put a lot of effort into making this an enjoyable read, as demonstrated by their very good linguistic skills, excellent grammar and frankly, good writing and formatting. FYI, this is the author's first novel so I cannot help but look forward to the future quality of the author's writing as they gain more experience. Give it a read and add it to your collection, everyone! Keep up the great work and good luck!!!

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