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The Point Legacy

นักเขียน: MasterOfTheCouch
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What is The Point Legacy

อ่านนิยาย The Point Legacy โดย ผู้เขียน MasterOfTheCouch ที่เผยแพร่บน WebNovel.PLANET EARTH in the year 2020,The ground shakes with a heaven sundering roar, a massive figure is seen in the vast skies above, the figure both stationary but omnipresent. A voice thunders, like the m...

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PLANET EARTH in the year 2020, The ground shakes with a heaven sundering roar, a massive figure is seen in the vast skies above, the figure both stationary but omnipresent. A voice thunders, like the massive roar of the inimitable tide, "You have been selected to represent me in 'The Games'." It sounds almost displeased when it utters the word "selected". "Brace yourself and say goodbye to the little attachment you have to your planet, for never will you see it again, unless...." Then the lights went out on a planetary scale. The world that Raj is sent to is one where people get stronger by absorbing energy from different sources. Watch as Raj uncovers the secrets as to why he was sent here. Disclaimer: May contain strong imagery and emotions, also contains violence and blood. This is a completely rewritten plot from my original novel, so old readers should read this too.

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Ada cinta dibawah guyuran hujan

Hadiah untuk tiga orang pemenang, masing-masing mendapat uang sebesar Rp 5 Miliar?!! Seru tiga gadis dengan kompak membaca pengumuman yang terpampang di layar smartphone salah satu pemiliknya. Megumi, Naomi, dan Kiyomi, tiga serangkai nama yang sangat antusias melihat informasi dari salah satu artikel. Isi dari artikel tersebut berupa ajakan untuk ikut memainkan salah satu game online dimana kedua belas zodiak berkompetisi menenangkan sayembara, untuk memperebutkan gelar dazzling King/Queen. tapi aku masuk ke golongan Scorpio. kata Megumi lho? kok bisa?? Zodiak kamu kan Aries. kedua gadis itu terheran-heran Bintang aku memang Aries, tapi aku bukan Aries murni. Aries yang satu tidak sama dengan yang lain. Zodiak aku dominan ke Scorpio kawan-kawan. Megumi berseloroh. Bah! peraturan darimana pula itu? Aku nggak paham. keluh mereka Ada yang tahu kenapa Megumi bergabung di klan Scorpio? Dalam game online tersebut, gadis itu juga akan menjalani misi menyelamatkan dunia anak-anak. Tentunya dengan seorang partner pria dari golongan zodiak lain. Li-el, nama pria yang mengisi kehidupannya di dunia virtual maupun nyata. pria yang sedikit.... punya masalah kesehatan mental. Disisi lain, hubungannya dengan Devdas, sahabat prianya dengan tingkahnya yang tengil, yang suka cari-cari perhatian kepadanya. Sehingga tidak jarang pria itu mendapat jitakan dari seorang Megumi, yang juga membuat hidupnya jungkir balik.

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Ji Zuan, The Evil Eternal God

Ji Zuan was once a True God in another universe, however, due to his cruel and vicious nature, he nearly destroyed the entire universe by attempting to sacrifice half of the living beings in the universe just to reach the last known realm, Eternal God. Ji Zuan's father, the only Eternal God was angered by his son's actions and luckily he was able to save them. Thus, because of that Ji Zuan encountered a backlash and destroyed his entire cultivation and became a mortal once again. "Ji Xuan! You damn son, if you can't change your nature then I will never bring you back here." Ji Hongzuan roared to Ji Zuan after he saved the half sacrificial beings. Then, a black hole swallowed the mortal Ji Zuan and sent him to another universe by his father. "I don't care if you will sacrifice the living beings there, Ji Zuan. But if I see that your nature did not change even if you lost everything then I will never let you enter our universe." "You damn old thing, if I can come back here I'll surely beat you up." Ji Yuan roared after knowing he cannot escape. "Son, I know your heart became cruel and vicious after your kind mother was killed by them. I hope that someday, people living in that universe can somehow cure your heart." Ji Hongzuan said while looking at the far far away and a tear managed to escape from the corner of his eyes. ------------------------ What do you think will Ji Zuan do? Will he sacrifice the people in there? Will he decide to experience the normal life? Or will he decide to sacrifice the living beings there? Who really knows? So come and join me to find out what Ji Zuan will do!

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Have to give myself a four because I write very slowly and thus cannot update very quickly, this really pains me because when I write a novel I want it to be a story that I love, something that I myself would love to read. If the novel doesn't fulfill my exacting standards, I am usually harsh in my criticism (although I don't like to be mean, so I usually don't leave reviews in novels that I did not enjoy) So, here goes... It might be a bit too early to rate my story development, character design and world background but I can review my writing quality. I take great pain to deliver a reading experience that I hope is grammatically error free, I love to add semi obscure words to at least challenge a readers vocabulary, if you don't come out of a book without learning anything, then what is the point? I do limit myself to not make the book full of flowery language as I firmly believe that a book which cannot be enjoyed by everyone regardless of their understanding of English just becomes pretentious (some people might fight me on this point but this is what I believe in) I cannot rate my character design, story development and world background yet as I am only on chapter 5. I will update this review once I have written more chapters. P.S - If you did not agree with some of the points I raised, feel free to reply to this with your argument. I do love a good debate, as long as it doesn't devolve into an all out brawl.

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These five chapters have hooked me in and made me look forward to the world that will unravel in the further chapters. Excited to see how this story progresses.

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