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The Dragon of Akiyame

นักเขียน: Makashima
Fantasy
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อ่านนิยาย The Dragon of Akiyame โดย ผู้เขียน Makashima ที่เผยแพร่บน WebNovel.Musashi Akiyame was a teenager that wanted to live his normal school Life until the past of his family was reaching out to him. A shadow was following him that he can't escape. He must face his past a...

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Musashi Akiyame was a teenager that wanted to live his normal school Life until the past of his family was reaching out to him. A shadow was following him that he can't escape. He must face his past and even reach out to abnormal powers that are forgotten by this world. Will he achieve Peace in this World? Or will Valyria fall under The Dragonborn. Find out and follow this exciting adventure through a World full of magic, mysterious creatures, Legends and the Realms.

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Tokyo's Last One Hour

Mohon maaf jika ada kesalahan dalam novel ini karena ini merupakan karya pertama saya!!!!! @Sinopsis@ Pada Tahun 3067 Tanggal 29 Januari Hari Sabtu tiba-tiba muncullah sebuah virus dengan bentuk yang sangat aneh seperti biji mata manusia di Daerah Kanto,Negara Jepang.virus ini sangatlah mengerikan karena siapapun yang tertular virus ini maka akan langsung hancur berkeping-keping atau akan menjadi mutan yang aneh.kemudian para mutan yang aneh akan menularkan virusnya kepada siapapun yang mereka gigit kecuali pada hewan karena sama sekali tidak bereaksi. Karena bentuknya yang mirip dengan mata manusia,para ahli menamakan virus ini sebagai E-V atau Eye Virus.E-V mulai merajalela di seluruh penjuru dunia bahkan saat ini E-V sudah hampir tak bisa diobati dengan penawar apapun. mula-mula virus ini hanya terjadi di Daerah Negara Jepang tetapi virus ini mulai menyebar ke Seluruh Dunia dalam jangka waktu beberapa bulan atau lebih.virus ini juga mulai berkembang biak atau berevolusi menjadi beberapa jenis yang berbeda-beda dengan kemampuan khusus masing-masing.PBB langsung bertindak untuk mengatasi masalah virus variabel baru ini dengan mengkarantina para manusia atau lebih tepatnya seluruh umat manusia di beberapa jutaan tempat yang mereka bangun dibawah tanah karena tidak dapat terjangkau oleh virus varian baru itu sama sekali. 7,4 Miliar Manusia kini hanya bisa tinggal dibawah tanah seperti cacing untuk bertahan hidup selagi beberapa menunggu para Ilmuwan terhebat diseluruh penjuru dunia dari berbagai badan bidang kesehatan menemukan sebuah antivirus yang membuat tubuh manusia kebal terhadap virus varian baru. nasib seluruh umat manusia kini diujung tanduk karena mereka tidak bisa lagi bersembunyi di bawah tanah karena kali ini para hewan mengalami evolusi karena telah terjangkiti virus tersebut.Entah mengapa hewan-hewan sama sekali tidak berubah menjadi mutan,malahan mereka berevolusi menjadi sesuatu yang lebih menakutkan. Selius Damian,seorang pecundang di kelasnya harus bertahan hidup saat sebuah virus mulai membawa kiamat pada seluruh dunia dengan beberapa temannya sampai membuat mereka harus melakukan petualangan mencari vaksin dari E-V untuk menghentikan kiamat bagi seluruh kehidupan yang masih hidup.

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Hope Comes with Despair

Wielders, individuals that are gifted by the Gods an ability to materialize a weapon of their choice with their magic, are sent to the Kingdom of Rudeforth to train and hone their skills as they prepare to end a hundred year old war with the Banished, once was called the villagers of Serwynn; they were exiled from the kingdom a hundred years ago for attempting to forcefully dethrone King Alfred through blood and violence, which resulted to countless of bloodshed that stained the palace’s walls. Fortunately they had failed, but despite the King’s efforts to completely wipe them out, the Banished was still a great force that can’t be defeated that easily. Having no choice, King Alfred summoned a dome like barrier that encages their whole part of the land, one where their bloodline can never penetrate nor can they ever get out. Looking at the present, Vivian Serwynn, the new proclaimed village chieftess of the banished had successfully invented a magical apparatus that weakens the one hundred year old barrier; it shifts the main responsibility of current wielders and that is to destroy those before it completely breaks the enchanted dome, the activity is called “Raids”. Kiara Eleanor is the first Wielder born in her village, expectations and hopes from her fellow people weighed utterly heavy on her shoulders; there was only one problem, at the ripe age of 18, she cannot summon a single weapon no matter how hard she tried. And at 2 weeks top, after being transferred to the palace, she was to begin her first Raid. The plan was to be stealthy and be out of the enemy’s range of sight as she attacks with however she can, but what would happen if she were to catch the attention of the chieftess? Will she survive and live to finish her duties as a Wielder? or would she be dead and fail her kingdom and village? Or maybe, something unexpected can intervene with the inevitable results of the war.

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funkiller_562
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Story development is hooking. Although the pace is slow I still wanted to read on and see what was happening. What I think you need to work on is descriptions. I couldn't picture the school classroom in my mind. When you're describing, talk about everything. It's the reader's mental picture that helps us understand what's going on. Also character design can be worked on. Apart from the main character, I couldn't really see any unique characteristics of other people. Writing quality is nice. Keep it up. Your idea is unique and that's the beauty of WN

RedAbigor
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I like the concept and idea of the story, but it is almost impossible to read. Punctuation is a mess. Events and interactions are a mess. There are tons of references to characters that were never introduced. Well, at least it helps to ignore the forced logic behind MC's actions. The way the author tells the story gives you cringe vibes; it's like reading the thoughts of a teenager, who gets easily distracted by literally anything while never having a meaningful or coherent line of thought. A novel could become two times better if only the author used some Microsoft Word software to check for obvious mistakes.

Tungi
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เผยเนื้อหาสำคัญ

Elien_69
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Very interesting story and nice writer (: .

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