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The Descent of Dawn

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What is The Descent of Dawn

อ่านนิยาย The Descent of Dawn โดย ผู้เขียน xash_alan ที่เผยแพร่บน WebNovel.In a world where only the strongest survive, Azuma was at the very bottom of the chain. He lived a life of suffering and loss, where his dreams and hopes were confined in the social structure. However...

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In a world where only the strongest survive, Azuma was at the very bottom of the chain. He lived a life of suffering and loss, where his dreams and hopes were confined in the social structure. However, a mysterious system update opens a new chapter of his life. It brings him closer to his dreams. Azuma races down the path of glory, towards a truth far more unsettling than anything, and unaware of the darkness that awaits… + + + Thanks for stopping by. Though the setting here is futuristic, the characters and places will retain some of their traditional touch. And as the setting is futuristic, a lot of things here won't follow the rules and laws of our current world. [PS: I do not own the cover art and all credits go to the respective owner]

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CHRONICLES BEYOND THE STARS

' It is said that, beyond our sky, there are countless of stars, and each star holds a world of it's own, with powerful abilities beyond one's imagination. And that as long as you reach your hand upward with determination, a celestial body might heed your call and come towards you.. ' ' What if you received memories of the future you? What would you do? Would you believe in them and try changing your life? Would you just think of them as a passing dream ?...' Somewhere in the void... A tall and muscular man with long platinum blond hair in a black robe stood in the void of space. He was looking before him, where a grand scene was taking place. Countless galaxies and nebulas were moving in specific trajectories as if they were following an order. " I did what I thought was right to do. I do not lament nor do I regret, for it is an emotion of the weak. If I had to choose again, I'd still do the same, that is my conviction. That's what makes #### who he is now. " He turned his head towards another figure that was standing not too far behind him and asked with an deadpan face. " What about you? ####, What would you have done if you received what I've received, would you have the courage and firmness to accept this gift ? " But he didn't let the questioned respond as he smiled and lifted his left hand, holding a golden longsword that was slightly vibrating and pointed it towards the questioned one before finally ending the conversation. " The weak will always be weak as long as they don't have the will and courage to challenge those who are stronger than them." After gently saying those words, the man slashed horizontally with his golden sword, * SHWINGGG!!!!* unleashing a bright golden light that went straight to his opponent at an amazing speed and at the same time- *Shuuu!!* His figure flickered forward, following closely behind his attack... In the vast void of space, Two figures could be seen moving closely together then separating from time to time. ---------------------------------------------- Hello! Author here! just to say that the book is still in development, or to say uhmm everything is still in development, please do bear patience with this author! I just posted the uploaded the cover and the synopsis because of my own impatience sigh... the cover doesn't belong to me, just found it in Pinterest. that's all for now!

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Lancee
LanceeLv1Lancee

A great start, the Author is descriptive through their words giving us the reader a chance to imagine this world they have built. The first chapter was a beautiful taste of great writing from the technology advancement to the current world state, the pictures the author created through their words are admirable. Overall a great story

Soul_River
Soul_RiverLv15Soul_River

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ThePotatoKing
ThePotatoKingLv14ThePotatoKing

This an epic sci-fi story. The story is set in a world which is being attacked by the abyss, some sort of huge dimension level dungeon with multiple layers. kind of like a tower but it goes down. Moreover like the name suggests, it as an extremely unforgiving and scary place. The MC is currently on a quest to look for a lost relative. The story mechanics, power system and sci-fi technology are extremely well thought out and detailed. The author's writing style and quality are amazing and I was sucked in right from the first chapter. The story flows so smoothly that I didn't even realize the passage of time. All in all this story has the potential of becoming a ranker. Best of luck author!

RogerKaos
RogerKaosLv1RogerKaos

After you see that awesome cover, I read it and thought... It could be better. Right now what I can say is that I had troubles following the story. You should flesh out your characters more, your world more, and that's my advice. I don't know what you can do to make your book more accessible, but I'm pretty sure you'll figure it out. Good luck in the future.

Averanges
AverangesLv3Averanges

In a sea of novels here, this story has a kind of originality. I got hooked just by the first chapter. Thats' rare to see so well written thing over here. The plot, world building is quite good for someone like me who read sooo many different stories.

DaoistvODbDR
DaoistvODbDRLv4DaoistvODbDR

A good start, alot of mysteries surrounding it, the word building is well planned and thought out, the characters are well executed. A new lease to everyone who likes this genre. Keep up with the good work

Loctovia
LoctoviaLv15Loctovia

Vivid and excellent!. These are the two words that i think captures this novel comprehensively. Simply put, I loved it and i am sure that you would too.

RomanceFanatic028
RomanceFanatic028Lv4RomanceFanatic028

I loved the start. It was an enjoyable read. The mc was someone who i could relate in so many ways. But the main thing is, your writing style is amazing. I would love to keep reading it. So keep up the good work.

Jolan_Hildebrandt
Jolan_HildebrandtLv1Jolan_Hildebrandt

Ask yourself am I showing or am I telling. You had so many opportunities to reveal character and heap empathy on the main character. You spent more time on exposition than you did anything else, in the first three chapters. I don't care if humanity developed advanced weapons. I want to see the main character using those weapons. I don't want to hear about his cold father. I want you to show me the despair. Fix this part of your game and I promise you will be a cut above the rest

Kara_wish_writes
Kara_wish_writesLv12Kara_wish_writes

I'll love the journey of azuma so far hopefully he will reach his goals. the world background is somewhere in another universe or in future.

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