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The 4 O' Clock Club

นักเขียน: The_Canary
Teen
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  • 4.7
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Meet Yuno and Rayven, newly stepbrother and sister in a small and isolated town of La Orden. Yuno is the new girl in town. She is finding ways to get used to the conservative ways of La Orden compare to the big city where she came from. But when she meet a new found friend and mysteriously disappears at the night of the dance, she needs to find her while continuously surviving the everyday life of a high school student. Rayven needs to adjust to the life of having a new sister in his house after his dad remarried. So long as Yuno will stay out of his way, they will probably get along just fine while keeping his big secret to her and to his family. But a group of guys keep on pestering him to join their mysterious gang, then a girl in school mysteriously disappeared. Join the adventures of Yuno and Rayven as they unravel love, identity, and secrets of their town in this series. Author's Notes: Let me know your thoughts about the novel by writing a review or through comment section. About the cover photo, I just found it on the net while searching for ideal cover. I'm giving the full credit to the owner of the image. I hope you will support this novel! :)

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Vengeance To The Royal Ones

"An eye for an eye." The day she burried her parents, this became Amber's motto. Their family just wanted to live their lives the way they wanted. But the royals didn't want them to do so. To fulfill a 3 year promise, their family travelled. But was then ambushed causing her parents lives. She survived and caused their car to explode as if it crashed, leaving within it three bodies, their clones. She then dragged her parents in order to burry them properly despite the location. After finding out who they would be helping, she declared, "I'll help you if you marry me. 5 year engagement, 5 year marriage. You have no choice you can only accept it." ***** "If they didn't want such a law abiding one, then we shall burry this company in the underground. They will regret ever taking action towards us." Ashton declared and his already cold demeanor turned even colder and blood thirsty. ***** After giving him a strong head butt, Amber pointed at him angrily, "Get your head straight and remember this, the reason why I am also here is to support you. The moment that contract was signed I have vowed to protect you as well." Do read my other stories: SHE'S THAT KNIGHT KNOWN AS ZERO (COMPLETED) COMING FOR THE LAST FOURTEENTH (COMPLETED) RESTARTING CHAPTER BOOK FINALE (COMPLETED) VERACITY OF THE PAST (COMPLETED) REBIRTH: STUBBORNLY FULFILLING A PROMISE (COMPLETED) LEFT BEHIND BY TIME (COMPLETED) Please support me on this page as well: https://patreon.com/user?u=52128033&utm_medium=unknown&utm_source=join_link&utm_campaign=creatorshare_creator&utm_content=copyLink

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My Evil Crown Prince

WARNING: [R-18] Fairy tales usually end in happy endings. But the life of a royal is not always a lap of luxury. Twelve years ago, she became the Crown Princess and the fiance of the next King of Flousia, but a strict rule was given to her that the engagement should be kept a secret. Alira Eleanor Wilson was the daughter of the wealthiest family in the country. As an heiress, she was treated like a delicate flower—always guarded and protected. And she was good at following the rules. At the age of six, she got engaged to the Crown Prince of the neighbouring country. But after the engagement, she was sent back home and never seen him again. Caden Hulls-Richards became the secret heir to the throne of Flousia at the age of six. He became the Crown Prince when the kingdom was at war with the mafia. He got engaged to Alira, his childhood crush, but was separated from her because of some circumstances. They were childhood sweethearts. He was the sweetest boy when they were young. He was her first love and being the crown princess she felt like fairy tales were real. But twelve years without seeing each other and years of longing and hope, Alira felt betrayed and abandoned. She had enough of always following the rules and being protected all the time. She decided to join her friends in a group date, but ended up being caught by none other than her fiance. And what if she discovered her prince charming had two identities? A crown prince by day and the boss of the most notorious Mafia Clan by night. Can she perfectly portray both role as the crown princess and the future wife of a mafia boss? ****************************************** EXCERPT: Her eyes widened while looking at Caden's naked body. But what made her heart beat faster was when he turned to look at her. His eyes seemed so cold and distant. As if he wasn't the Caden she knew. He stared at her like she was someone he didn't know. "C-Caden, I-I'm sorry. I called your name b-but you didn't answer." She stuttered. She was supposed to run away when Caden walked toward him. She froze and couldn't take a single step. His upper body wasn't full of scars, but it was full of tattoos. He had a rose tattoo on his neck, a skull pierced with a sword, and wings on his chest. THIS IS A SEQUEL OF MY BOOK MY EVIL BOY TOY! PLEASE SUPPORT THIS BOOK AND LET'S FOLLOW CADEN AND ALIRA'S LOVE STORY. **Book cover is mine. Art by elkshan.** Please do not repost! Contact me at skymaiden0319@gmail.com Instagram: authorsky_maiden Facebook: Sky Maiden FB Link: https://www.facebook.com/sky.maiden.121 Tiktok: sky_maiden

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Greetings to the author! I am currently in chapter seven and the story development seems to have a perfect pace. (It's not fast nor is it slow! good job) The writing quality is perfect, there are no errors when it comes to vocabulary and spelling. As for the characters, they seem to be described in an astounding way. The author does a good job when it comes to descriptions since they are vivid. When it comes to the world background I have nothing to complain about since it is truly genuine. Right, I almost forget to say, your dialogues are impressive and genuine by the way. Keep up the goodwork and don't forget to stay healthy :) This review is brought to you by: Snom! The cutest Pokemon in the whole world.

The_Canary
The_CanaryนักเขียนThe_Canary

Hi everyone! It's the author of The 4 o' Clock Club. This is my first time writing a mystery novel since my previous book is a isekai novel. I draw inspiration from Riverdale Tv series and Nancy Drew since I'm both big fan of those two media franchise. I know everyone is saying it's an interesting take to have alternate POV in my story but I want to show the readers the whole horizon of La Orden not limiting only to one POV. So hope everyone will support the story. Thank you!

yizreel_jez
yizreel_jezLv3yizreel_jez

This is a good story. The Synopsis was good, Grammar is little to no error but I love the writing quality of it. I should say you're a Filipino like me, Yea I love the prose! The plot was great for me, The characters are well designed and Overall I liked it much! Great job well-done author, a big thumbs up for you! P.S. I added it to my library. I gladly will support your story fellow citizen!

Gourmet_DAO
Gourmet_DAOLv7Gourmet_DAO

Oh new novel, congratulations! MAKATI CITY A friend of mine lived and worked in Bonifacio. It would be interesting to read how the city itself looks. The first chapter was read very easily. Your story looks entertaining. Plus, bilingual, how will your person build relationships in the social hierarchy at school? These are very exciting questions! Wow!

Regius_Sanguis
Regius_SanguisLv4Regius_Sanguis

Hmm... take off the 'Y' in Rayven and what do you get? That's So Raven! 😄😄 Glad to see you're working on new novels. I still like the first, but these two are also good. Keep it up 😉😉😁😁

Mel_Aniv
Mel_AnivLv4Mel_Aniv

The pace of the story is just perfect. The grammars were okay and the characters is developing nicely. As a fellow filipino author who's language were Filipino, it was a job well done.

Hesreth
HesrethLv10Hesreth

Is this going to be a coming of age high school drama with themes about adjusting to a new life with some mysteries (detective club stuff?) with the occasional pop culture reference? Cuz I'm in. Also I'm an autistic Yuno and that draws me in >.>

yaejin
yaejinLv3yaejin

Ohh gosh!!! THIS IS AMAZINGGGG!!!!!!! Haha I was having fun reading that I didn't know when I reached chapter 11 lol 😂😂😂😂😂 This is my first time reading a mystery novel in wn.. I'm familiar with only Dan brown books.. but this is amazing.. I was too into it that I forget about commenting lol. You might have to notice the punctuations but other than that, the story is perfect. I like the change of pov's making us, readers, notice what happens in the step-siblings life.

lucabear
lucabearLv2lucabear

Quite a lengthy first chapter, but this did not hinder the experience at all. Enjoyable and good characterisation. Also very descriptive and detailed. Keep it up ^^

minho_Shiny
minho_ShinyLv3minho_Shiny

To be Frank.... I really like this themed stories and I'm eagerly looking forward for the next chapters. The story development is also in well pace. And I liked the authors way of description.

Jhema
JhemaLv2Jhema

Yo, same genre... And the funny thing is Riverdale series also inspired mine too (Story for another time, lol). I'm loving it and I hope to see more. Cheers!

_Tesla
_TeslaLv4_Tesla

Beautiful story, first time reading a book of this genre but I'm liking this one, your narrative skills are very good and haven't noted any grammar and spelling errors.

evolx24
evolx24Lv2evolx24

The character switch are greatly done. I think lots of people who try to do that fail most of the time, but you do well so far. That pace is correct, your novel actually reminded me about Riverdale TV series and so I was right haha. The synopsis is perfect too. I don't have anything negative to say lol. You know how to express your thoughts - You know how to write :)

phantom6_sensei
phantom6_senseiLv3phantom6_sensei

Nice writing the story so far is good pulled me in to read more. I wanna read more of what the author has to offer. Really lucky to have read it.

Blank_thought
Blank_thoughtLv10Blank_thought

This is some good work! Your writing is fluent and your narration is the best ^^ I like the change of perspective from chapter to chapter between Yuno and Rayven, very original. Sorry for the late review, I was kinda busy, so to make it up for you, I recommended the story to a friend. And guess what, now you have 2 other fans!

ThirtyTyrants
ThirtyTyrantsLv3ThirtyTyrants

I'm very interested in this story's premise. Particular the weird club that wants to recruit Rayven. And I love a good mystery surrounding a missing person. I also love the dual perspective. Both Rayven and Yuno are interesting protagonists, and I like how they're navigating their new relationship as step-siblings, which seems very realistic to me. Both the pacing and plot of the story are really gripping, and I look forward to knowing how it will progress.

enthu_reader
enthu_readerLv14enthu_reader

Author has done a good job with shifting POV's. It makes us curious to know what will be the take of the other character. The story pacing is right with the mystery introduced roht on the 2nd chp. Writing quality and grammar gives a nice flow to reading. 😊😊 Keep up the good work author!

Ooukination
OoukinationLv1Ooukination

I'm entertained! The switching perspectives is quite similar to my story and I like it. The pacing is nice, likeable MCs and side characters (especially Dylan) and the mystery solving is progressing smoothly. Overall its a good read.

Lazy_leon
Lazy_leonLv13Lazy_leon

I'm the first two chapter you understand what kind of world it is, the next two are about the Mc A unique story telling through the perspective of two peoples! The sixth chapter shows the world is not as normal as it seems~ The male mc is definitely or maybe the main Mc, need more chapter to understand!

Archwriter
ArchwriterLv4Archwriter

Currently in chapter 7. I have to say this POV exchange is quite interesting. It makes reader curious about what the other character is thinking. The writing quality is great and I can't find any grammatical errors which need to be pointed out. The characters are also introduced amazingly. Its just that I have to check the title of chapter after just reading for a while. For now I have added this one to my library. Good job Author! I hope you'll continue publishing more chapters.

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