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I really loved your old version and feel that you've done really well balancing his love life but maybe you should keep track of them and write down their personalities as sometimes I feel they are being skipped over or try to lower the numbers. Another point of the book I am dissatisfied is that thier should be twists in the story like how maybe chorus falls in love with mc(this is not spoiler). Generally I also feel you should focus more on the characters personalities and depths than the battle scenes. Your subsystem idea with their own personalities is a really good idea and I hope he gathers a bunch of subsystems&system. The systems are more fleshed out than the female leads in my opinion and also could the first wife have a different system pretty plz😊😝. I HOPE THAT YOU READ THIS SINCE I SPENT A LOT OF MY TIME WRITING THIS REVIEW. . . SUPPORT TO AUTHOR YOUVE DONE REALLY WELL

This story is a new take on the overpowered system. However, for those of you who haven't read the original, it will have subsystems still, and the characters personalities will all be the same. Lie Wei Ying will still do funny things with the system. However, he will actually be much more powerful than before.

Was surprised to see this, I checked out the first chapter and was surprised at its superior quality. I do hope that you maintain the quality of the first chapter that you have released as you continue to write and release chapters. Good luck to you and this new iteration of The Overpowered System!

I really did enjoy this story or the old one. Yes, somethings weren't amazing but the system was dumb friendly and funny. Now it's just some edgy dude with a system. Generic. Doesn't deserve the overpowered system name.

Really though what the hell is phasing through walls? That's totally useless I hope it's abilities are gonna be like the old overpowered system, if it just turns you evil, crafts stuff and lets you phase through walls I'll probably not read this anymore

I, never thought I would write a review of this. Or at least a bad one. I had only a few issues when I was enjoying the old series. But this series ahem. This is all I see. EDGY DEMON SLAYER SLAYS DEMONS. The opening was an auction? Or was it a fight? I don't know at all. And it's not just that. I enjoyed the old slightly funny and taking itself half seriously old series. This is the starting chapter so I'll still give it a chance but it is a low quality of the older one.