Spirit Of The White Lotus

Although I don't read a lot of novel with female lead, but I liked the way how you portrayed the innocence of a young child. No matter what anyone says, your writing is absolutely fine. It's easy to understand and you can instantly connect with the story. Overall a great read, I'd definitely suggest it to the people who loves reading female lead stories. Keep writing 🪶

This was a heavy read. Starting with how the main character lost everything before even opening her eyes to the world makes me feel despair and worry for her future. It got me engaged, hence why reading through it felt like a breeze! The emotions, family hatred, loss of loved ones, forced marriages, and politics all weave together a captivating narrative. If there's one thing I'd like to see more of, it is how the step siblings were raised and their unique perspective on the main character. But otherwise, I can't wait to see how the story unfolds!

Its my first reading a female lead novel and it did not disappoint it is well written good job. I actually enjoyed it keep up the good work 👍👍👍👍👍

This is an early review. I read a lot of historical story with FL protagonist. This book started with a heavy emotion as the protagonist was cursed by his own father. Its feel heavy to read because the emotion is on point. It is really unfair fate for the protagonist to have such a pitiful life upon her birth.The overall story is really good as you could understand many scenes with ease. The thing that makes me a bit off might be the future ML. I don't like the type ML that harsh at first then became fall in love. You know, its like something that I used to read but no Karma happening for the ML past action.When it comes to a protagonist that I loved, I always want her to have the best of the best partner. I hope there would be an option for the ML for romantic choices.

The story is not my cup of tea, but it's interesting for those who like the genre. The writing could be improved a bit, but considering the author's English is not their main language, you have leeway. I suggest editing the chapters and checking for small mistakes. Overall, if polished, it will be a nice story.

This is a very interesting book and I like how the character building is, I rezlly sympathize with the female-lead and this is an amazing book.

This story is interesting and engaging. There's definitely potential for improvement, but the narrative itself is genuinely sweet, and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it! Keep up the great work, author!

the gramma used is easy to understand and the plot seems nice for those interested in this genre, I don't usually read these types of books so I don't know about it's uniqueness but if I get in the mood, I definitely could binge some chapters, update could use some work tho

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First, the writing is smooth with a bit editing, it will be great. Just add (.) at the end of the dialogue and end it with ("). The story development is quite confusing. What the fl wants was to discover the truth about herself (if I'm not wrong), but I didn't find this feeling of the character. The prologue is good, but the next chapters are rushed. Adjust the synopsis according to the story. The characters need to be fleshed more. Give them ambitions and let them try to achieve it. Express their feeling in more sentences, don't rush to another's pov fast. It will be hard to track who is the one talking. The world background needs more improvement. The setting is a Chinese Empire, so try to stick to it. (I knew it's hard) The marriage vows? Did it exist? All the best.

its a very cute story, and i can tell English doesnt seem like your first language but you did well regardless, there's room for growth there but the story itself is really sweet and i like it, really enjoyed this piece!

Grammars can be fixed but not priority. I can still read the story with ease. Also, I like how the world is built and how the tension rises. But the important consideration that must be resolved here is that it's mostly 'telling,' not showing. To be blunt, I can't feel any emotions on dramatic scenes at all. It's an interesting read if this issue was fixed. Other than that, the development has a potential.

Wow, just wow. I have been drawn into this novel since I started reading it. This is a gem. One thing I love most, is the author's writing style. It keeps my brain processing what was written and I don't use to know when a chapter ends. Keep it up, our wonder author

*Good synopsis, makes me want to know more. *in the 1st chpt you write either Emperor Cai Huateng or he. With a long name be wary of repetition since it starts to get boring fast. i.e just "Emperor" or "Cai" would be good sometimes or some descriptive adjective. Same with other character names. *The way you start and end chapters makes it hard to stop reading. Good job! *I like the way the character's dialogue is written. The way they converse is engaging. All in all seems pretty good even though this type of sad romance isn't my cup of tea.

I don't particularly like this theme in novels, but this one grabbed my attention. The writing is fluid and has coherence from start to finish. Keep working hard

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I rarely read this type of story but after reading for 10 chapters, I think the story progress well and interesting. Although the writing may have little issue but it won't affect my joy to read the book. To Author.: English also not my first language, I truly understand your feeling. But you have a good story! Please keep up your work!

Still in the first few chapters and I must say I really love the story. It’s engaging, and Ruolan is so likeable. I’m more of a manhwa type person but I really like this, I’m even imagining a manhua adaptation as I read this.

The author sets an interesting premise, with palpable tension from the get-go. I wrote this as of ch6 as the genre isn't my cup of tea, but I can still say a few good things. The pacing is fairly excellent, neither detracting from the experience by being too quick nor needlessly diving into any one scene. The details are sufficient to give the world some color, which is more than can be said for most novels. Once the author goes over the grammar and gives it a polish, I am confident this novel will be worthwhile. Best of luck, and enjoy your novel. :)

This is a masterpiece I love the author way of writing. I just crave for more after reading the first chapter