An Important Non-Chapter

Hello everyone.

It's quite hard for me to actually read the comments because I know how shit this novel has been. But I'm grateful for your critics.

Just going to be honest with everyone here, I have a bullet list for the plot that I want this novel to take. But then, like what I usually do, I went too far from the original plot list.

I re-read the bullet list and compared them to the story that I have now and I can proudly say that this novel is shit. I do want to complete this novel, but it seems that the flow of this novel is so... broken that even myself doesn't want to read the chapters that I have write.

I realize that making an 'original' novel is very hard, especially when I'm a stupid and not a creative person. But I do hope to write an original someday and publish it either here on to an official publisher in my country.

Now, I did say that I write a DxD fanfiction in the last chapter. I think I have 4 or 5 chapters there. To summarize, it's your typical DxD fanfic about a reincarnated person born all the way back before the story starts. There are some world-travel elements already built there. Meaning that the existence of other worlds is visible, unlike this novel.

A novel of harem building and also the MC is very OP. Like I mean really fucking OP. Not from the start but immediately became one some chapters later.

I will post the chapters right after I write this. It's called "Journey Starts in DxD". If you cannot find it in the search bar, I suggest for everyone to wait for 5 more minutes.

Be warned that I do not edit the chapters using Grammarly or any writer tool software whatsoever. Because it was 4000+ words long per chapter and I need to get it out now so I hope everyone can understand.

Once I'm done uploading the chapters of my other novel, I will make another chapter but this time as an auxiliary chapter in this novel.

As much as I'm a man with a glass of a heart, I want everyone (if possible) to say what is wrong with this novel. Does the cafe thing is not, for the lack of a better word, appropriate for this type of novel? Is the "betrayal arc" not satisfactory? Any suggestion on how I should make things move forward?

I'm looking forward for your suggestions in the comments, both in this chapter and the future auxiliary chapter.