Pokemon a new beginning (rewrite)

Micheal Wells an aspiring enginneering student in his final year at university dies. Due to his atheism and his love of pokemon when he meets a ROB he asks for various cheats and to be reborn in the pokemon world lets see where this story leads us. This is going to be a more structured story based on the original that I posted. I struggle with writing dialogue and fight scenes so if you have any idea's on where I need to improve or ideas on how to write them pls let me know in the comments.