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Pentogon (Broken)

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อ่านนิยาย Pentogon (Broken) โดย ผู้เขียน Selene_Abbyson ที่เผยแพร่บน WebNovel.This novel has a strange problem and I can't seem to access it properly. I will duplicate the story. Thank you for your time....

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This novel has a strange problem and I can't seem to access it properly. I will duplicate the story. Thank you for your time.

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Jeffrey_Liudeng
Jeffrey_LiudengLv1Jeffrey_Liudeng

This was an epic series, def should read. a few spelling mistakes but its fine since most of us have a brain and can infer what it means.

Allie_Zhang
Allie_ZhangLv1Allie_Zhang

Emotional + Mental Support ;) Keep going! I'm still waiting for the new juice in Chapter 1 & 2 & 3 & 4 & 5 & 6 & 7 & 8 & 9 & 10 & 11 & 12 & 13 & 14 & 15 & 16 & 17 & 18 & 19 & 20- -you get the point, just hurry up and make more >:]

okkk_8649
okkk_8649Lv1okkk_8649

Although this story may have a few flaws here and there, it’s still an enjoyable read and there is a lot of potential for it to be a good book. The introduction of the main character and the unfamiliar setting is good with a few grammatical errors. I think that the story can be further enhanced with a special personality for all the characters which should also impact their decisions. The narration and Dr Vanta’s dialogue should also be more professional in my opinion. Going to be waiting for the rest of the book!

Elicia_Robins
Elicia_RobinsLv1Elicia_Robins

This story was terrible. I came into this story because a friend of mine recommended it to me saying it was 'really good' and to support one of her friends. Y'know, it's probably just a 9 year-old that's writing shit. Basically everything was dialog and sometimes you don't even know who is the one speaking due to lack of specification. I have a feeling that the order of events is going to be all over the place and isn't going to make sense. This 9-year-old should grow up before posting shit on this website and wasting people's time. This is highly not-recommended.

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