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Path of the Twin Swords

นักเขียน: AmorphousVacantia
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What is Path of the Twin Swords

อ่านนิยาย Path of the Twin Swords โดย ผู้เขียน AmorphousVacantia ที่เผยแพร่บน WebNovel.The twin gods have been the guardians of the Seiren lands, maintaining the balance between life and death for ages. However, nearing the end of their era, they decided to pass on this responsibility t...

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The twin gods have been the guardians of the Seiren lands, maintaining the balance between life and death for ages. However, nearing the end of their era, they decided to pass on this responsibility to humans. They sealed themselves within the swords, and chosen individuals among humans became the owners of these swords, inheriting the duties of the gods. This tradition has continued to this day. Our story begins with the training of the chosen ones, Tadashi and Yu, whose bond as siblings and their future actions will alter the destiny of Seiren. information: Please forgive me for any mistakes, as my English proficiency level is not extremely high.

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Salju dan Kamu

Seorang gadis lugu asal indonesia bernama Neonomora Hazel memulai Kisahnya di pinggiran kota tanabe di negeri sakura Baginya Cinta adalah hal yang harus dia hindari,gadis ceria yang takut patah hati itu,beranggapan mencari seorang kekasih baginya bukan hal yang harus di utamakan dalam hidup,Hingga perjodohan memaksanya mencari cintanya sendiri. Darren chesna adalah pria pilihan keluarganya dengan kualifikasi sempurna seorang pria,namun Hazel bersikeras menolak perjodohan tersebut. Rasa kagumnya pada seorang CEO muda bernama Akira Kuroba membuatnya mengenal sakitnya cinta tak berbalas untuk pertama kalinya. Min Young Dae Seorang Produser musik asal korea selatan yang sedang dalam perjalanan bisnisnya dengan sahabat lamanya di jepang.Bermaksud bunuh diri setelah di tinggalkan kekasihnya, justru berujung kepada pertemuannya dengan Hazel dan keterlibatan dirinya dengan perjodohan Hazel. Malam bersalju menyatukan hati mereka yang tengah membeku karena kisah pilunya masing masing Kisah cinta Hazel dan Dae di persulit dengan persyaratan sang ibu dan kembalinya mantan kekasih Dae bernama Yumiko tetsuya yang tengah mengalami permaslahan dengan pasangan barunya,membuat perjalanan cinta Dae dan Hazel semakin terjal. Pernikahan keduanya pun terjadi dengan banyak konflik di dalamnya,Dae yang tiba tiba teringat mantan kekasihnya,hingga kehadiran Hirotada Jeaha seorang pelukis muda asal kyoto yang terus menerus memancing kecemburuan Dae karna kedekatan Jeaha dengan Hazel. Ditemani Maeda Miura sahabat lama Hazel yang selalu bersikap dewasa dan menjadi tempat bersandar bagi Hazel,akankah Hazel bertahan dengan kehidupan rumah tangganya dengan Dae yang penuh konflik dan dramatis. Atau dia akan menyerah dan membiarkan hatinya kembali dingin seperti dulu. Musim dingin menjadi saksi kemanakah kepingan kepingan hati yang membeku tertuju.

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The Reborned One: Mabaya

Mabaya, was the second daughter of a Count Household. She was the least capable out of all her siblings but still she somehow ended up wedded to the Duke of the Almasen Noblehouse. Everyone in the noble circle called her the overnight Cinderella but unbeknownst to everyone was that, she was living no fairytale life. Her presence inside the dukehouse was non-existent. She wasn't even treated as a proper Lady of the house. This was all because their marriage was a bit crowded. Living inside their home was Duke Almasen's true love, his mistress, Luningning Fuentes. A commoner who was unexpectedly hired as a maid in the house that somehow caught the cold-hearted Duke's interest. Ah... if only Mabaya had the chance to start over she would tear that marriage contract to pieces and throw it at that wooden bastards face. Unexpectedly, her whines were answered. She got a second chance, she reborned......but God above....why? Just why did you reborn me in the wrong time?! "You have already signed the papers, with this you are now my wife. Pleasure doing business with you." Ah.... I was too late. ____________ (A/N: This is my original story and it is pretty fast-paced so please do read at your own risk. And also this is unedited so please please please bear with the wrong grammars, misspellings and etc. Tehe (*≧ω≦*) (The picture is not mine so credits to the rightful owners.)

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This fantasy story is a refreshing take on the classic tale of gods and humans, with the added twist of twin gods passing on their responsibilities to chosen individuals through divine swords. The writing is engaging and the characters of Tadashi and Yu hold a special bond as siblings that adds a layer of depth to the story. The author's imagination and storytelling skills are evident in the magical world of Seiren that they have created. The action and drama in the story kept me hooked till the end, and I can't wait to see how the chosen ones will alter the destiny of Seiren. A must-read for fantasy fans!

AmorphousVacantia
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Hello, I wanted to evaluate myself as a writer. First of all, I must say that the beginning of my story is a bit weak, but my story was the beginning of the creation of something beautiful. I gained a lot of experience while writing my story. I improved my writing skills and I could feel it. This was beautiful. Anyway, this is not a place where I need to explain myself. If I had to criticize myself, I liked some parts of my story and some parts I didn't like. I couldn't use the potential of some characters and I couldn't achieve the development result I wanted. While the main character's development was progressing well, he could not turn into the person I wanted at the end. This disappointed me. In conclusion, my story had great potential, but I could not fully use it. My final comment did not fully satisfy me in the final part. The reason for this is that I did not achieve the character development result I wanted. And I apologize that my English is not very good right now, but I will reflect it very well in my story. You will understand this in a way in my 3rd novel. The perfect way to turn a minus into a plus.

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Alrighty, for your first novel, this is pretty good! I'll admit, there are writing errors, but that's to be expected and which you can easily fix. I definitely felt like some parts were dragged out for way too long, and naming one off characters only to be killed wasn't exactly necessary either. But there are definitely interesting ideas you managed to create, 'the entity' can easily show up in any of your other stories should you decide to create any. I personally feel like being a cosmic being unable to physically change the world, but influence is an idea I like very much. You can practically make your stories connected somehow, or at least reference this story within your other future ones. Overall, for your first story, it's okay, there are ideas that work and you should develop more. Also tone down the grim dark stuff next time, admittedly that might make people to stop reading entirely and drop your novel.. 😅

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