Onepiece: A King with Summons

The story is not bad, it has the potential to be great. First of all, i love that he has the power of summoning. But wouldn't it be better for him to have the summon summon fruit, when he was a kid, of which allows him to summon beings that possess the same strength as him. so if he has the power of a yonko, he could summon a being with the power of a yonko, if he is smart and calculative as Aizen, he could summon beings as smart as him, etc. Now to world background. Well it sucks. there's a lack of information of where his kingdom is located, how long it has been standing, his full name. even the name of the kingdom is told late(10+ish chapter). Character Design. MC is bland. maybe it's just me sucking at reading, but it could be better. we don't know his past self before reincarnation, what kind of person he is. Mc basically died, reincarnated, became king, got system, and rule. the MC feels empty, lacking and feels like a food not well done. My suggestion would be to make his personality akin to Ragnar Lothbrok. very charismatic and his unique way of speech, would be more interesting to be read. Updating 1 per day, so pretty good. overall, 3/5 stars. Have potential, but could be better.

Hello there, I haven't seen Fanfics with this type concept around and more so, I just wanted to write a fanfic with this concept so I went ahead and did it, I dont know if you guys are gonna like it or not, I hope you do like it though. One more thing, there will be absolutely no harem.

There are so little One Piece Kingdom Building FanFics smh. I’m glad I found this one💯I really hope you don’t drop this story because only 5 chapters in & I’m already hooked 🔥 Ps. I’m really happy you didn’t make the MC a weak king that has to rely on others to protect him💯ALL the One Piece FanFics with a kingdom system never gave the MC his own strength smh, And in a world where the strong rules..a weak king with a strong army makes no since.

This story has some real potential. Please, don't drop it. Thanks for such a great read—I'm excited to see what you come up with next!!!!!!!

Loving the crossover! The fallout from Crocodile’s actions was handled really well, and Time Skips is important as they cut through the boring stuff and get straight into it, and Augustus' power boost is exciting. This fanfic keeps getting better—definitely worth a read! There are no doubts some flaws, but I believe that if it's overlooked, reading the book is a rather enjoyable experience.

i have seen quite a lot of kingdom fanfics few managed to keep me entertained dont disappoint me too much

There is no one at the vice admiral level in Alabasta, one of the most powerful countries in the Grandline and at the same time one of the 20 countries that established the world government, with an army of millions. Do you really think there will be people at the vice admiral level in random kingdoms? There are at most 5 rear admiral level people in Alabasta.

One of the best One Piece fics out rn. The idea is great and you get hooked nearly instantly. The MC is smart and make the best use of his options given to him. Also who doesn’t like kingdom building❤️. Read it(I’m not asking)

The story is well written, has good dialogues and is fluid throughout, the characters fit into their place and everything is realistic. I give it 5 stars because I really like the way it is written, it is basically a novel set in One Piece.

It is a wonderful idea and at the same time a bit of a let down with the rushed ending. But overall good job author keep it up. It is a wonderful idea and at the same time a bit of a let down with the rushed ending. But overall good job author keep it up.

This story is pretty god I cant lie, The way you've managed to blend characters from different universes is good. I especially liked the part where Augustus gains a portion of Godfrey's power—what a game-changer as I have noticed people tend to leave the king as powerless sometimes for some reason. Also, the developments in the kingdom with new hospitals and schools show real thoughtfulness in world-building. And actual progress. Can’t wait to see what happens next, especially with the Summit war right around the corner and Godfrey's power to match the WG now. It's a decent work of fiction, Your new here on this platform I belive, so all I can say is Welcome and don't give up on your Fanfic even if it may seem at times that it's not growing in comparison to others on the leaderboard.

if you like a genocidal maniac as a protagonist this story is for you , the mc became a psychopath in 2 chapters