One Piece : Earning One Trillion Berries Before Retiring

it's a good fanfic for entertainment 😄 , highly recommended 👌

The writing style of this fanfic is horrible, one of the worst I've read in a webnovel, it uses (brackets) to express the emotions of the characters, there is no basic flow in the plot and dialogues, it seems that the MC is talking to an NPC from a game with bad dialogues. Really is a pain for the eyes read this fanfic

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Lots of use of emotions, every single dialogue has emotions written in bracket, like Nami(angry) : dialogue Kahn(intrigued) : dialogue So on and so forth... Never seen a narrative like that and dont like it one bit... It breaks immersion and is just straight up annoying ngl. Not to mention the pace and story is all over the place, one time, the MC is talking about old days, his dissapointment, his justice and then the very next second he does stuff or monologues about how to profit off of his justice Anyway dropping the fanfic

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