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Death's Game

"Gandalf said, 'End? No, the journey doesn't end here. Death is just another path, one that we all must take. The grey rain-curtain of this world rolls back, and all turns to silver glass, and then you see it.'" (J.R.R Tolkein) When it happened it felt like a release. Freedom has never felt so good on my tired body and battered soul. Logically, I know I'm dead, but... I looked around me as my body and soul was tugged through space itself. I passively noticed the stars and planets getting smaller as I descended towards the void. Is this the afterlife? [Welcome Ms. Mia Petrova to The Afterlife] I heard a females voice say and I turned my head looking for the person. I noticed many other people spread out also descending fast like me into the void. The man closest to me held his hands up screaming in excitement and I couldn't help but giggle in amusement. I noticed a ripple in the space beside him and watched curiously as something slithered through. I choked on my shock as a snake-like creature appeared from the ripple and swallowed the oblivious man whole. Before a noise left my mouth the creature already disappeared into another ripple of space. I couldn't help my body's reaction as my soul and body were already exhausted. My eyes rolled into my head as I fell unconscious. ... "My name is Death and I would like to welcome you all to your afterlife. As you already know, it's not what you thought it would be. To be fair we have been running out of space for about 2000 years when the population was only 170million on earth. Now the population of the living is 7.8 billion well...you can understand why the afterlife took a huge shift in perspective which has only been refined in today's age. " there was a pause and then the voice chuckled and continued. "I'm about to impart some knowledge that is a little earth-shaking but hopefully exciting. You see the painful truth about life is that life is a vacation. It's the real paradise away from reality. In Death, you all will face the reality. The reality is this... " AN: Bear with me, this is my first official story. I will be writing ✍ at my own pace. I'm open to constructive criticism and stupidly obvious errors. Any similarities with other stories are either coincidence or subconscious projections. I have read countless stories and I have a ton of ideas in my head. However, it's all a jumble so I will take my time with this and get it right. I hope you enjoy my take on the Afterlife and a system made by Death himself. P.S if you want to visualize Death he looks like a badass Daniel Craig as shown in the Book Cover. lol

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Maxim Warner never had it easy. Coming a long way from a small town, he finished his studies and became the billionaire neurosurgeon that he is today. Everything in his life can't be more sorted than it is now. However, when he ends up having a super messy breakup, a queue of blind dates, and a mother intensely whining for grandkids, it takes him some time to convince himself that everything is still within his control. But when he takes a familiar blonde as his tenant despite his mind flashing red flags at him, he realizes that he is deep in trouble this time for this is the same woman who once held his heart within her grasp. Diana Chen, an American-Chinese heiress finds her life flipped upside down when she holds a 6-months baby in her arms. A tiny life that she is supposed to protect now but it comes with prices. Her dreams, her family, and her wealth. The little thing is costing her everything. Nevertheless, on the worst day of her life, she moves to another country and decides to start a new life. And probably it is a good sign that her new house owner is a familiar face. "Oh my god, Warner, I almost couldn't recognize you!" She ruffled his hair but unlike how he used to laugh in the past, he did not react and the atmosphere suddenly felt strained. Let her take it back. The new house owner being a familiar face is making things awkward because the hotshot neurosurgeon might not be the quiet guy she used to know once. He is the same....but his eyes are strangely smoldering her. And she is beginning to feel things that she should not feel for him. God, is it too late to find rent somewhere else? Maxim has yet to get over something that Diana did to him in the past while Diana has a baby to raise in her penniless state. Amidst all this, the last thing they want is to look at each other across the dining table like the world lacks oxygen and their mouths are the only solution. But when the mysteries from the past unveil themselves gradually, will the two be able to get over their differences and own up to their feelings? Or will it be the final 'The End' for them this time?

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Bpcb
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Hello, slightly bias Author here! I really hope that everyone reading is enjoying the book! I plan to stay for as long as possible but I don't have a certain path the book will take. I always change some things and so any ideas are greatly appreciated! If you have any questions please feel free to respond and I will try my best to answer as soon as possible!

Silver_1_Phoenix
Silver_1_PhoenixLv15Silver_1_Phoenix

So far so good, this novel if off to a great start. I haven’t read any lycam isakei’s so this is a New idea for me. The MC seems OP right now, but not in perspective to others. I cant wait to read what happens after the MC evolves a 2nd time.

RodrlgooO
RodrlgooOLv3RodrlgooO

Dan'm man that's a good novel keep going! good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good

pumpkin_3
pumpkin_3Lv1pumpkin_3

Really nice start, loving the narrative so far, the way the action is built up and described makes it a very nice read. Can't wait to see where this story goes. [img=coins]

ThouShaltNotDie
ThouShaltNotDieLv2ThouShaltNotDie

I’m enjoying it so far Good good good good good good good Good good good good good good good Good good good good good good good Good good good good good good good Good good good good good good good Good good good good good good good

mistermoon
mistermoonLv3mistermoon

it's good, but the world is more like a game which I don't like personally but could be better for other ppl, also wish the author would spend more chapters focusing on him being a werewolf but that could be in later chapter so I would still read it.

UhVise_Necro
UhVise_NecroLv10UhVise_Necro

Eh i tried read to chapter 30 and hes hiding his strength and it makes no sense. he has no enemies so he has no logical reason to hide. his transformation maybe but not just normal fighting

ShadowFenrir
ShadowFenrirLv4ShadowFenrir

Pretty good so far ^^ ...................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

Mill_01
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Woaron
WoaronLv4Woaron

I like the concept but for some reason it does not feel right, it's like it's missing something i just don't know what is it from the light novels and fanfics that i read. Anyway it's hella rush, confusing and no background at all. I don't see his personal life and he didn't even started with the other players, He's like an Emo kid with no interaction with the other players or characters and super bland like a lot. I'm not entertain reading this for 15 chaps, and I'm not even curious what's going to happen next because confusing. Anyway that's my review I hope you improve.

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Foxikgen
FoxikgenLv5Foxikgen

The title of the book is interesting, but similar stories have long become boring. The author describes his fantasies rather than trying to write an interesting book with a unique plot.

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