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Narrator: Keen

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#WFP#17 THIRD PLACE WINNER Attention: *Book One completed* thank you for supporting Narrator: Keen. let's go through this journey together. ****Warning: Contains mature content.**** No Rape or Erotic. "Where am I?" Asaya of the other world asked "In my ship", he said. "Pirates!" *** Asana Keen reincarnated to an angel shape to save another world. Meanwhile, she meets her other homologous version in that world. She will realize much truth about herself... Would The Keen angel be able to bring changes and gain love instead? what are the consequences if disobey? Turning to Ash like never existed or becomes a normal person and gains the taste of love whether knows it is bitter. But bitter medicine can heal a body so love does the same! A bitter cure to heal her soul. To fill the deep gap within her. ===> please join my discord server if you have questions: https://discord.gg/vtGqMgYb9K cover art by me

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Author Note:

Personally I love this story and had enjoyed while writing it, and I hope you do so. 

And I apologize for my English. It is my third language and I have been trying to improve and set everything beautifully inside the second book. Thanks for bearing with me...

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Love, Peace,

Author Naz*.

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Chapter 1.

Your soul may be capable to do many things, a hidden power. If you are aware of it, hush, keep this secret to eternity. For the sake of you as long as demons jogging around.

You won't learn till something supernatural happens to warn you about inner power. This is a truth that you are escaping away from it. You know the reason.

Your soul may be able to travel in time or other worlds and you are still unaware of how to use it, thus from now on remain vigilant because there are many worlds out there that you may step into one of them without even knowing that.

A person just like you with the same name is living beyond your world trying to contact you within your soul. A twin or much better to say another version of you in a different situation. He had the same habits and interests as yours. They may ask for your help.

Your spirit without letting you know responded it. Undesirably your soul will fly to them and of course, it is another game of destiny. A well-written tale about you, which you can't guess what is coming next and when you wake up, "it was all a dream", this is what you give it a definition and named it. Just an excuse to calm yourself down.

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It was raining at night someone knocked on the door in rush. Asana descended the stairs opened the door without asking by door phone who the person is.

Just couldn't believe her eyes as the door groaned opened. Her body froze, Edris was right in front of her sight more similar to a sweet dream she didn't want to wake up, what an unexpected lovely surprise. He hugged her.

She was the much surprise that stood still after that, her brown eyes wide opened, not even blinking when Edris mumbled, "Hey won't you let me get in?" she moved away and he entered inside patted her brown hair, and gently smiled. Her handsome Twenty years old brother finally came to meet them. He had changed a lot in two years.

"Moommm", she screamed still in the shock of her brother's returning home after two years of living with their grandfather. He used to call them once a week always voice calls and avoided video calls.

Her mom was setting the dinner table. She had a salad dish in her hand, pulled it on the table, and ran out of the kitchen looked convulsive after hearing her daughter screaming, strode towards the door and her mouth dropped in wonder. She expected thieves or some bad guy to attack the house, but that was her son who came home after all.

After greeting and tears living in their eyes, they entered the kitchen. She placed more dishes and put two big slices of steaks into his plate.

"Eat well, if I knew that you're coming I would make your favorite ones". She said eagerly.

"I love it, mom, if I would call you it couldn't be a surprise anymore", he brushed fingers to his black hair and his hazel eyes got soulless, when he asked, "Where is he?"

"Here", a thick drunk sound echoed behind him.

"Sh*t, pie-eyed again", he whispered and Asana nodded with a pitying look.

"How is my father Edris, did he send you back? What had you done to him that he sent you back here?" he cried, approached, and had his seat.

Edris attempt to ignore him, but couldn't keep that tongue mute, "Oh, don't bother intensely I'll get back to Morach in a week".

"Are you here for business?" Asana guessed and he nodded not interested to explain more.

"You tell me about fencing courses Russel said you're going to pass tests for Olympic, I'm really proud of you".

"Ignore me it's just fun, you know that isn't my goal. That's too bad my master is your best friend always reporting me!" She was going to those courses to be away from the house and dramas that her father was accustomed to make! Edris nodded at that and they finished their supper in peace.

After eating, her dad's face was still serious when Edris said, "Hey Nana how is everything with you? Tell me more of these days."

She made a fake smile on her face and answered, "It's all good, thank you, and I got enough on my plate with studying and fencing training". He knew that it's surely not the thing. She was escaping and didn't mention spending time in parties or Bars and having fun outdoors.

She was alone and got no friend, but Anna and John, these two book-worms childhood friends. His sister was innocent and alone and still resisting to go with him to Morach where his grandfather ruling. She didn't want to live as a princess being locked like a bird.

They were in the living room when their mom's cellphone rang. It was an old song of rolling stones, "I can't get no satisfaction, cause I try and I try…" how the lyric was repeating. She skimmed at the number but didn't pick it up. Her husband snatched the cellphone, checked the number, and said "who is this?"

Rina's heart shattered that tone of him alerted a new drama as if she discovered, somehow didn't want to see a fight like the last one he had with Ed, softly said, "not an important call, it's my colleague Lena".

"Why the hell she calls you at this time?" said loudly.

As always Jonas was drunk didn't know what on earth he was saying. "It is the result of a forced marriage looking for a single nonsense reason to punish the others especially your partner," Asana thought.

Edris yelled at his dad, anyways they knew that it comes, after all, he was so sensitive about how his father was behaving his mother, "you still drinking that trash, I thought that you've changed I don't even get what the hell is your problem!"

He raised his hand above his head and slapped his son as hard as he could. Enough strong to make his cheek pink.

"He never changes and his problem is that he doesn't want us". Asana said to him while dragging his brother away.

This time Jonas rose a hand on his daughter, but her Mom took his hand. Tears were spinning into Asana's eyes and just didn't want to cry, something locked her throat aiming to burke her. She ran outside in the dark hazy weather and didn't realize that she stopped in the middle of the street, lights seized and bit her eyes when something hit her.

The world waved at first then changed to a vortex and she opened her eyes in a strangely familiar place, gasping, jumping up, and very confused. She wasn't able to talk or do something just observing around as a witness like someone who's watching a historical 3D movie. There was a girl who just looked like her but in leather old fashioned outfits. She was writing on a papyrus, and a parchment map wide open sat on the table.

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