Marvel login system (In Pause)

Pk tout le monde écoute le MC comme si c'était un gourou [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

This novel deserved to be report and remove out of Webnovel. The character in here is dumb including tony stark. The mc was also stupid. it's not worth reading this just find some random fanfiction to read.

it reads like a tml I can see that there was a lot of correction but I'm pretty sure there a story that is one for one like this only it's was first in English and the system was different along with the powers and the Mc name In my option it's not good

Tbh i would say since ur only 15 chaps in go bak n reread ur chapters and fix the gender situation

você vai mudar algumas coisas nessa história? lembro de acompanhar ela por outro tradutor, porém eu lembro apenas a trama básica. espero que você consiga tirar os bagulho de chinês...

re zzz conseguir la plantilla de superman de la edad de plata al toque.👎👎👎👎

one of the best read fanfiction I seen good story can't wait for more

[img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted]

เผยเนื้อหาสำคัญ

Hello, author, tell me, have you thought about a story in which a person died and was reborn as a symbiote. And then he decided to merge with Parker from the Gwen Spider universe.

I recently started reading this novel and was pleasantly surprised. The unique ability introduced in the story caught my attention, and I’m looking forward to seeing how it develops in future chapters. While it’s not without flaws, it doesn’t deserve the overly negative reviews from some readers. There are certainly worse stories out there, and this one shows real promise. I reccomend reading this for it’s uniqueness

The dialogues and the way things unfold don't feel natural. You can read it without much thought to pass the time. But if you want to follow along and read every part with interest, I don't recommend it.

Better then 98% of translations out

เผยเนื้อหาสำคัญ

this is not a proper review will write one if this novel is for me, just got a question. Will there be any yuri in the harem not a fan

Muy buena historia milmilmilmilmilmilmilmilmilmilmilmilmilmilmilmilmilmilmilmilmilmilmilmilmilmilmilmilmilmilmilmilmilmilmilmilmilmilmilmilmilmilmilmilmilmilmilmilmilmilmilmil

[img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it]

It's a great story the problem is the grammar, but the story wise it's Great 👍.

Muito bom 👍 Ĥhhhhggghghjjgjjgjjjjbbjjjfhhgfyhhgghbvbhjjjjjhgfghvgggggjh7jgtgghhhhhjbbvvhbvghhhhjjjhhhjhjgjjjhhhhhbvggvvvvuugguhbhhhhjjjjkjjjjjjjjjjj

[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]