Majikoi: Fix the World Line Seriously!!

Heya! Author Here! Imma give this one a shamless review to thank everyone for your overwhelming support! The views and collections on this book has skyrocketed in the past few days. It gladdens me to know that many people love Majikoi like I do. Also a shameless plug, If you like this novel why dont you give Akashic Records: Paradise Lost a shot? It's an original novel I have written that has been in the back burner for a while. Although I have started writing it. I'd still be spending more time writing this one.

I would say that the story was an enjoyable one alright. Majkoi had always been a favorite eroge of mine, especially the first one since I somehow got it uncensored which made the experience much better. Although S does came close though as it introduced my waifu, Monshiro (I can already hear the siren). That said, I love all the waifus and seeing the all heroines route being a thing is like a dream come true, so thank you very much author-san. In term of story, it has been a suprising one. The idea and execution was quite good considering it isn't sorely focused on Majikoi as a whole. I would dare say that author-san has a lot of knowledge as a man of culture considering the fandoms that had appeared thus far. There are also a few twists and turns that I honestly didn't expect but they were nice regardless. However I do have 2 things that I would like to address. Firstly the dialogues are usually too clump up together in one paragraph. Now that generally isn't much of an issue but the mentionted dialogues paragraph involved mutiple characters speaking rather that just one which ultimately makes it difficult to follow everything. Having more line breaks would be preferable. Secondly, I feel like certain scenes are too fast-paced which doesn't convey the intended emotions fully as a result making the experience less complete. I know that everyone has their reasons for doing what they do, so this is just my opinion on what could be improved after reading the story. Finally it has been an overall nice reading experience. After all finding Majikoi fics is like searching for a needle in a haystack and not to mention most of them didn't even reach the good part before the author mysteriously disappeared. That is why I hope to see more of the story, so keep up the good work author-san!

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finally an author who brings this great work, I hope you don't abandon him, even if you can only upload one chapter a month , thanks you :D

Just cuz its majikoi, 5stars, i didnt even know there was a visual novel series, i have only watched the anime. Might have to look into that.

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Keep up the good work!!This is the first fanfic i have seen of this series.