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Magic Swordsman In One Piece (D&D)

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What is Magic Swordsman In One Piece (D&D)

อ่านนิยาย Magic Swordsman In One Piece (D&D) โดย ผู้เขียน KuroWashi1903 ที่เผยแพร่บน WebNovel.Two unfortunate boys, one from Earth and one from one piece. One of them wants vengeance the other wants justice. With the help of an omnipotent being, they become one. Let us see if their unfortunate...

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Two unfortunate boys, one from Earth and one from one piece. One of them wants vengeance the other wants justice. With the help of an omnipotent being, they become one. Let us see if their unfortunate lives are going to turn for the better or if it is going to be a life of misery and hardship. A/n: in this fan-fic, I am going to change people's age to fit my story. So it is going to be a bit of an AU. The system is not going the have an ego. The Sword Saint is a D&D magus subclass, and it is NOT a cultivation class. I am not going to follow D&D rules and class spells, Mc's class was inspired by D&D, but I can go beyond D&D rules and get spells from different classes or create other spells. I can only guarantee one chapter a week. Mc is not going to be a straw hat and not going to take a straw hat as a companion. Disclaimer: I don't own One Piece; it belongs to its respective author.

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# WEAKTOSTRONG
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Neko Maid Asa and her Master

Author:I've been bored and can't talk to someone I care deeply about recently because of my lack of having a smartphone or tablet so I kind of let my mind wander and so I made a Neko Maid oc. Letting my brain wander even more I ended up thinking up a story. Just be warned, if this story was a movie it would be rated R. There's gonna be a series called "Neko Maid" and each Neko maid is different from the next. They're all treated differently. This is just the beginning! Enjoy!! ---------- Dear Diary, My name is Asa Eikko Mikki, age 19, and I am a neko girl. I've worked for Master as his only maid ever since we were 15 years old. I've lived in Master's castle ever since we were both babies. My mother, Eikko Asami Mikki, was also a neko maid for Master's father and mother before they all died 4 years ago. Master blames me for his parents deaths, but has no grief for my dead mom, whom I miss dearly. He fired all the other maids but kept me and I've no idea why. The only people who remain are the butlers who've been coming and going for the past four years. They change every year. Oh, you're probably wondering about my father, he died before I was born, according to my mom, he was a kind and loving man, he loved mom so much, when he found out mom was pregnant for me, he loved me too. Mom was sad when he died before he even got to meet me, but she managed to be happy for me up until her untimely death. Master hates me very much and has his cousin punish me daily for things I never heard of or for things I didn't do. Master used to be gentle and kind but now he's empty and cold. I'm going to bring him back to his old self! Even if it means dying. - Asa Mikki, 2053, April 3rd I sigh and set down my pen, closing my diary. My ears twitch as I hear the bell coming from Master's rooms. "I do hope he doesn't wish to have me punished... it is my birthday after all..." I say, leaving my small, dark, and dusty room.

CharaFFWDACD · แฟนตาซี
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4 Chs

Remember To Die

Come embark on a journey that transcends the boundaries of sanity and challenges the very fabric of comprehension. As you delve into the intricacies of this odd facility, trust becomes an elusive concept, and the line between friend and ...food blurs into a murky abyss. Each corridor holds walls that breathe, and every whisper in the air seems to carry the weight of death. Encounter creatures beyond the scope of human imagination. Nightmares manifest into reality, and the boundaries between dream and waking life dissolve like mist under the moonlight. If you ever even get to see the moonlight that is. Prepare to lose yourself as death follows your every move. As death is your only escape. Unless you're stupid enough to uncover the truth behind what you see.

TheKillerSpoon · สยองขวัญ
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2 Chs

万古神兽主宰

这是一个脉兽为王的世界！这是一个王朝更替、规则不变、强者为尊的世界！ 东郡王府境内的云雪圣山上，齐王府强行破二脉脉兽的齐天羽，沦为一介废人，导致自己被家族抛弃！ 三年两人相依为命，妾不弃君而去、三年后君不负妾！扶手万载共赏星河繁华！ 然苍天不负少年之心，让他偶得机缘，觉醒了各种掌管混沌的远古洪荒神兽！ 觉醒了神级脉兽雷霆之主白泽！ 觉醒了神级脉兽太古之主苍龙！ 觉醒了神级脉兽神炎之主赤神凤！ …………………… 这是一段不朽的传奇之旅！ 苍天之上齐天羽驾驭十三只天兽横行无忌的走过。 星辰之上的诸天神魔、万族至强连滚带爬的滚开，跪在星河之上，只为求的一条生命！

粘人的糖 · ตะวันออก
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77 Chs

THE SUPREME PERSONANITY OF GODHEAD: REBORN; JOURNEY IN OWN CREATION

IN THE NORTH OF THE ENDLESS CONTINENT. THERE IS NORTHSIDE COUNTRY WHICH IS COVERED IN THE SNOW. IN THE CENTER OF THAT COUNTRY THERE STOOD A MAJESTIC PALACE WHOSE DOORS ARE CARVED WITH GOLDEN SPIRIT STONE AND WALLS ARE WITH SILVER SPIRIT STONE WHICH PROVIDES A HOLY AND NOBLE VIBE WHICH STOOD IN THE CENTER AS THE REPRESENTATION OF POWER. AMONG MANY COURTYARDS THERE IS ONE COURTYARD THAT IS EMBARKED BY DIAMOND SPIRIT STONE ALSO KNOWN AS LONELY COURTYARD. ARIZ NOK IS STANDING IN THE TOP STORY OF A LONELY COURTYARD AND HE IS VIEWING UPWARD, IF ANY IS PRESENT THERE THEY WILL NOTICE HE IS GLANCING ABOVE THE UNIVERSE IN THE ENDLESS CHAOTIC DARKNESS. HE IS GIVING THE NOBLE AND ELEGANT AURA WHICH IS OUT OF THIS UNIVERSE. IF YOU GLANCE AT HIM YOU WILL SEE HIS BEAUTY IS NOT FROM HIS BODY BUT THE DEEPEST PART OF HIS SOUL LIKE HE IS THE MOST BEAUTIFUL CREATURE OF ALL. HIS EYE IS LIKE THE BOTTOMLESS HALLO IN WHICH THE INFINITE AND ENDLESS UNIVERSE CAN BE CAPTURED, THE STANDING POSITION AND HIS IGNORANT FROM HIS EYE SHOW THAT EVERYTHING IN THIS UNIVERSE IS AS IMPORTANT AS A HEAVENLY OBJECT, STARS ARE ALSO UNWORTHY OF HIS GLANCE, AS LIKE HE IS SUPREME OF ABOVE. SUDDENLY THE DOOR OF THE TOP FLOOR OPEN, ESME "ARIZ WHAT ARE YOU DOZING FOR" WHEN HE GLANCES AT HER HE DOESN'T HAVE AN IGNORANT OR DOMMERITING AURA BUT A KIND AND LOVING AURA AS A SON HAS FOR HIS MOTHER. ARIZ " I AM SEEING AD ENDLESS CHAOS MOTHER" ESME SUDDENLY TRIES TO GO ON HER KNEE BUT WITH THE THOUGHT OF CHAOS SHE CAN'T KNEEL. ESME " LORD I AM JUST YOUR DEVOTEE I HAVE DONE LONG PENANCE OF YOU AS TO OBTAIN YOU IN THE FORM OF MY SON WILL YOU PLEASE BE MY NORMAL SON BY GIVING UP ALL YOUR DIVINITY. ESME WAS PLEASED EITH ARIZ WAS HIS NORMAL SON. ARIZ THE SUPREME LORD OF GODHEAD WHO IS OMNIPRESENT AND ABOVE ALL WILL GIVE UP HIS DIVINITY FOR HIS MOTHER WHO HAS PENANCE FOR A LONG TIME TO GET HIM AS HIS SON? WHAT WILL HAPPEN WHEN THE SUPREME LORD WHO CREATES AN INFINITE NO OF UNIVERSE IN WHICH EACH IS ENDLESS HAS TO START HIS JOURNEY FROM THE BEGINNING AND HAS TO FULFILL HIS RESPONSIBILITY AS SON TO THAT MOTHER WHO FIGHTS AGAINST THE WHOLE WORLD TO OBTAIN HIM AS HIS SON? LET'S GO ON A JOURNEY WITH US TO SEE THE JOURNEY OF THE SUPREME LORD IN WHICH HE WIL OBTI=AIN HIS GODHOOD AS STEP Y STEP AGAIN.

darkcreation · แอคชั่น
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1 Chs

The Devil's Seventh Wife 1

It is rumored that city has a very rich William family, unfortunately, the great young master Christopher has a serious illness, a disease that is expected to live no more than 30 years old. It is also said that in recent years, Christopher has married almost every year, but no wife has survived, the reason for getting married is unknown, but the cause many wives has died. no one is good either. When the William family brought the bride to the Elizabeth family, Arianne did not expect that her biological father would cruelly push her into hell, forcing her to become the seventh wife of Christopher. When entering the monk's house, Arianne had committed suicide, had escaped, but in the end, still could not escape the arranged fate. Every day, not only has to take care of a sick husband who can vomit blood to die at any time, but also have to deal with all kinds of traps and conspiracies of the people next to him.

DaoistZWceEE · แฟนตาซี
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105 Chs

Multiverse: Undefeated Bahamut Chronicles

Travelling through unpopular verses: Starting From Undefeated Bahamut Chronicles. P.S: The image is not mine. But I've re-edited it--with my mid-skill--Changed Lux's white hair to black (the MC's hair color), and the eyes to be pure black (Mc's eye color) I want to see how far I can go with this one. My experience in writing is still mid, but I'll try my best. He died in his previous world without living a fulfilled life. However, he got a second chance he never asked for nor wished for. At the same time, perhaps seeking a more fulfilled life, he decides to see where this new crazed journey will lead him. .... Author's note: Ugh, I wasn’t supposed to release this until I had at least 15k words, but at the same time, I’m curious to see how much interest there is in these not-so-popular anime verses because there are lots out there. Some might not like them, but I have an interest in them. Then, when I thought about it, I decided, why not. I'm also curious about what insanity I'll cook from these. I'll be the one to decide which worlds he goes to next. P.S: Mc doesn't know anything about the world's he'll be travelling to. Extra P.S: Don't expect it to be a high-quality fic, and don't expect too much.

Heavens_Hell · อะนิเมะ&มังงะ
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15 Chs

Arcane Ascent: Rise of the Collector

Humanity faced its greatest challenge when it was taken by the Tower and given an ultimatum: clear all 100 floors or perish. Armed with classes, magic, and the aid of gods once thought to be nothing but myth, humanity set out to climb the Tower. However, humanity failed, unable to surpass even the fiftieth floor. Kai is an Ascender - a warrior who has dedicated his life to climbing the Tower. But he, like the rest of humanity, failed. Now, with mankind on the brink of extinction, Kai obtains a seemingly impossible opportunity to return to the past, where it all began. Armed with knowledge of future events and a vast wealth of killing experience, Kai sets out to make sure that this time, humanity survives.

John_Doever · แฟนตาซี
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1 Chs

The Law of Beasts Book 1

Alicia Chay has ruled the supernatural realm for forty centuries. As the sadistic queen, she detests mortals with a passion, but she love animals because she learned how to control her murderous impulses through sparing their lives. She protects them through the Treaty of the Animals: a declaration signed in blood by every King of every Animal Tribe in the supernatural world to maintain balance between good and evil. Alicia hunts down wealthy, demonic vampires that illegally use human bodies to snub precious animal life. After destroying an elitest church led by a crooked Pastor, she comes face to face with an angry demon that wants her dead. Meanwhile... Alicia is being observed by Airick Burgoos, a powerful supernatural shapeshifting tyrant that has direct orders to deceive her, but he has his own agenda...

Jabreel_Wilson · แฟนตาซี
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KuroWashi1903
KuroWashi1903นักเขียนKuroWashi1903

This is going to be a weak-to-strong story and an AU. MC is not going to be a straw hat or a pirate. He is going to try and establish his own law and order.

1yr

Albanian_Gamer
Albanian_GamerLv4Albanian_Gamer

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11mth
Scarface3699
Scarface3699Lv4Scarface3699

pretty boring overall, grammar mistakes and spelling errors are minimal but in enough of the novel to require a editor or something not a commenter. The plot is meh i, i think the writing style and dialogue are bland. The power system for the MC is needlesysly complicated for the world. There is a way is a way to make it work if u trim all the fat of it.

11mth
Hanni_Baal
Hanni_BaalLv4Hanni_Baal

Ok, the idea is very interesting, but it is poorly implemented, do not be discouraged author, you said that you accept constructive criticism and this has every intention of being so, this can be improved, continue with the story, improve with practice and keep in mind what I tell you for your next FF. I clarify, I have not read all nor do I plan to do so, because I really cannot accept some of the author's decisions, I will talk about them later, but in view of the potential of this idea I decided to leave the problems that I see, with the intention that the author improve and, perhaps in the future, rewrite this story with greater coherence; In the same way, I am not going to talk about spelling because, not being a native, I could easily make a mistake. Now, it is understandable that the beginning is a bit forced, with the mixture of worlds and everything, but the writing in general is quite rough, the narration does not feel fluid, making it difficult to immerse ourself in the story, I mean, do not throw the information at us so in our faces, also sometimes it seems that you forgot to put something in or it occurred to you later, so you decide to include it as if it were a last minute addition to the plot, like the blacksmith; or I also just read that after killing the bear, the teacher deduced that it was by a sword technique, but that's said by the omniscient narrator in the crudest possible way, you could have done a little scene of Koushirou bending down and checking the cut and then being surprised at the mastery of the sword, internal chatter and all, or something like that ... My point is that is better if you don't throw us the conclusions you want us to draw, use your characters to form the idea little by little or give us the clues so that we can achieve it, the first one is very important to create the framework for the other characters skills, and for giving mysticism. Another error that I saw is how you attacked the scale of power and the physical reality of things, that is, the techniques that the MC would know do not make sense, some because they require advanced knowledge that he simply does not have or because Zoro creates them on his journey; and, at the same time, doing it like this you just delegitimized all the efforts of the rest of the swordsman in your fiction, wich make it pointless unless this is one of those lame FF of OP characters that act like chinese Young Masters; and the blacksmith thing destroy the logic of your story! It's the reason why DXD is an absolute joke, there's no effort in half of their characters; which brings me to the last and worst mistake, empathy, you tried to make us empathize with the main character through a traumatic past, and it was not that bad, crude, yes, but the idea was there, but there was no growth period or anything, you didn't give us time to appreciate his situation and growth, preventing a true empathy with your character. And let's not even talk about the casual modifications to the time line, that some do it in series like Naruto, Fairy Tail or DB where the time line is poorly planned and as long as you keep certain immovable nodes everything works, it can work, just if they keep it in a decent explanatory order, but in a story like One Piece where the attention to detail is so high? It doesn't make sense, and it's too big a risk for the mere convenience of your wishes author. In any case, in summary: Narrative, character development, balance, and be coherent with the origin story and the theme of your novel.

9mth
Nightsking
NightskingLv1Nightsking

Great story I came here from your other story and this one doesn't dissapoint as of chapter 4. Like the setting and the way you write so thank you for another story!

1yr
Apollyon_
Apollyon_Lv4Apollyon_

It’s an ok one piece fic. Expect ~5 grammatical/spelling mistakes a chapter. Author could benefit greatly from running his chapters through gpt or Grammarly. The power system is some kind of derivative of dnd 5e. If you’re not familiar with the system, expect to read multiple chapters explaining it in a way that doesn’t make sense in a real world. Things like spell slots and action economy have no purpose outside of a game/system world. Expect borderline wiki dump explanations for each ability, and each option for an ability that the mc gets each time they level. 5e as a system is intriguing, but I feel it’s poorly implemented here and bogs down the fic way too much.

10mth
Newnoob
NewnoobLv4Newnoob

[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] Love the fic hope you don't drop it down halfway.

11mth
Erkani
ErkaniLv1Erkani

The book is decent, pacing is slow but I like reading slow pacing stories. The MC is weak at the start and gets strong with time .All in all a good weak to strong story.

11mth
DaoistDa
DaoistDaLv1DaoistDa

I was a fan of your other work and I am coming there. Author-san you do not dissapoint in this story too. It is a fun concept and I like the way you write plz continue too give as good content.

1yr
DuchessKolslaw
DuchessKolslawLv2DuchessKolslaw

Shameless rating. Not taking a Straw Hat or joining luffys crew. Perfect 5star rating. I haven't even read a single letter of the first chapter and I like it.

1yr
Humbuub
HumbuubLv4Humbuub

Had fun reading this, I was skeptical at first since I'm not familar with DnD system and rules, it's quite refreshing and made the power scaling more reasonable. Got tired of those FF who learned Rokushiki & Haki on the get go just because they watched the anime. My main gripe would be the slow updates. The dialogues seems natural and didn't sound like Chinese characters who shouts "kill" and curse words all the time. 👍

8mth
Craterzech3
Craterzech3Lv3Craterzech3

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11mth
StevenWar
StevenWarLv15StevenWar

Really good story, but I gave 4 stars for writing quality because there where some minor spelling mistakes with 'her/his/ and 'she/he', other then that its one of the best ff I have reed in a while.

11mth
bbori
bboriLv1bbori

It is a good fan fic about. It has a slow pacing story. Only bad thing about is author only releases two chapters a week.

11mth
Ahmet_8799
Ahmet_8799Lv1Ahmet_8799

I have read your other novel and like this one, I am a fan off. with this novel you do not dissapoint. this novel has good idea and it show you have a bit more experiance since this one has a good pacing. I like the DnD inspired power. Author please continue your good work

12mth
anubis1650
anubis1650Lv5anubis1650

I have to say I like it I'm a little partial to D&D stories so that may be affecting how I view this but there's good character interaction. The story and set up are good from what I've seen but since I'm only on chapter 11 it has not gotten to Canon so you can never tell if it's going to tank there. In my experience reading fanfiction usually the start and Canon are where the major difficulties show up I can't tell you how many times I've read a fanfic that has a good start then as soon as I got to Cannon it was like reading from the Canon script with only a few or minor changes sometimes not even that.

1yr
Oleg_Nikitin
Oleg_NikitinLv1Oleg_Nikitin

Хорошая работа. Герой конечно имба, но такое весьма частое явление. Больше всего нравится ход истории и мировоззрение главного героя, без того, чтобы быть пиявкой на ноге Луффи или сохранить канон. Делай что должно и будь что будет.

6mth
gREcOvITSIoZo
gREcOvITSIoZoLv13gREcOvITSIoZo

it is very well writen and enjoyable. Usually I am relactunt to read one piece with external power systems, but it has been surpiringly good !

8mth
Piotr_Uklejewski
Piotr_UklejewskiLv4Piotr_Uklejewski

******************************** Good work! ****************************************** ***************************** And i need more! ***************************************

9mth
Jahar
JaharLv12Jahar

Good story, the intro is well written and innovative. As well as the rest of the story. In short, I advise you to read it, you will not be disappointed.

11mth

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