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Lion's Sin Of Pride(MHA)

Author: LovableBerry
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One day a young man who likes to read manga and watch anime, was sent into another world, he wokes up in the world of Hero Academia as The son of Enji Todoroki and the twin of Shoto Todoroki. "Escanor!" they call him ===================I I just wanted to write this for fun, a not so op but also op story, no need for roasting or telling me im dumb cuz I don't care, I write this for fun, I just want to share it, but if you like it leave some reviews cuz I'm shameless

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Hello guys after thinking for a while, I decided to remake this fanfic, don't worry it won't take long I promise, also if you have any suggestions just comment it.

Here.

Yeah over there, Don't worry I won't run, if you have spare time check out my other novels, also for the ones who were complaining about the lazy guy, I created a new one where the mc is energetic and prideful....something you all like, just saying xD anyways I said it in the wrong novel but I promise I won't run, I shall return.

I dropped this fanfic you say?

"Who Decided That?"

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amaturewriter
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Look this is interesting but it has senseless **** that made me drop. -MC is shoto bro, SO cannon is fked BUT 14 yrs this asshole lived and did nothing, and author didnt even show any world development nothing. Not even family moments during those yrs. -No one is curious that MC has an axe quirk...Endevor would've definitely been curious *And know what stupid? author makes MC get kicked out for no reason, senseless **** -MC's quirk at 4 yrs old allows him to barely fight his dad, at noon [or atleast allows him to do so as he gets older]..MC is strong, but he dosnt do **** to prevent mothers abuse, or brothers abuse,,,he is powerful [and also should be very smart cause he is SI, but no, dosnt do **** cause I assume author wants cannon---un imaginative, look, I get its hard to think of ****, BUT if The MC is strong enough to defeat shoto with a punch why didnt he help em,,fking retarded,,,,he could;ve taken dads focus and protected Family] -As mentioned above, author dosnt imagine **** and senseless **** happens,,like MC not helping, when he clearly can....he is an ***** in a kids mind, why not just skip grades?, he was strong, why not show that to dad and prevent tragic cannon events from happening? -MC born to a japanese household has a stupid name like escanor, again, unimaginative and stupid . -Author does changes but follows cannon, and seeing how stupid **** happens, I bet MC will suck izukus dick, be friends/rivals with bakugo..ignore Hippocrates of UA, and BNHA world. Look this is interesting but a lot of senseless **** happens, rewrite and fix is what I suggest.

RestingTree
RestingTreeLv4

I personally couldnt get past chapter 3, and I didnt even finish it. Which I know to many will automatically invalidate my review, but hear me out if you have the spare time. [ Skip to Bottom to See all Stars ] The Writing Quality is at most a 3, I never really knew what was going on, it all seemed like gibberish to me, I knew who the main character was suppost to be, and I knew what he was doing, but if I try and even remember what actually went on, it comes out blank. The story is entirely un-interesting and honestly numbs the brain. Stability of Updates is 5, sense while I really dont like this story, the author is keeping his updates stable and its a satisfactory ammount for the fan-base it has. Story Development I can't really review sense by the time of chapter 3, I couldn't even understand if there was a story or if it was just a self-insert where the author wanted to be Escanor but also Todoroki's twin at the same time because he practically abandons him family, worse than Todoroki's father in the regard he even feels like his family owes him. ( Which is not 'The Sin of Pride' its the sin of a idiot who wants everything hand given to him like the apple given upon to eve ), but from the direction I guess this story will go in past chapter 3, I'm going to give it a 3 star, simply because I as the reviewer don't enjoy it and don't see much prospects, the author may improve in a short time span and suddenly write the next scripture. Character Design, if I could I would give it 0, but I must give it 1 star simply because the system requires it, and also he atleast made a character of some sort. The MC is honestly just atrocious in behavior, personality, he's not even atrocious as in he's 'Evil' he's just a bad human being who's actions dont represent his thoughts, and his thoughts hopefully never get turned into action sense he's a self-entitled prick. World Background, straight 1 because its just MHA, the MC litteraly lets his entirely family suffer the same fate as in MHA, nothing special about the world, it's your classic self-insert that will most likely be dropped and is majority enjoyed by Power-Fantasy crazed people. Writing Quality: 3 Stars Stability of Updates: 5 Stars Story Development: 2 Stars Character Design: 1 Star World Background: 1 Star ^ [0 If not required by the site, its utterly atrocious]

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